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Water and Sky


You are my azure sky- 
     and I, your silver sea.
          We merge at our horizon 
               in dawn's pale saffron light.
Late afternoon, 
     my violet waves shimmer
               beneath your crimson sky.
And at Eventide, 
     your bright coral glow 
          warms my deep emerald sea.

In the dark of night, 
     your strong, deep jet hues
          meet my quivering magnolia waves,
stirred by the bright moonbeams 
     that reflect and dance 
               with their song of love.
At last, my sea 
     gently ripples at the horizon's line,
          cradled by your embracing sky,
as I drift into sweet carnation dreams-

until the dawning sun 
          once again wakes our horizon 
               to a majestic and brand-new day.

You are my azure sky-
     and I, your silver sea.

          
March 11, 2016

~7th Place~
Contest: Water and Sky
Sponsor: Gregory Bardin
Judged: 01/24/2018

~3rd Place~
Contest: Colorification
Sponsor: Silent One
Judged: 03/21/2016
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Grasso Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:50 PM
Very pretty piece, Sandra. Congratulations on your win! ...Fran
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:23 PM
Thank you very much, Francis, for your visit and supportive comments. Much appreciated! :) Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:14 PM
Beautifully romantic, Sandra. Congrats on your win.
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Thank you, Line! Much appreciated! Hugs, Sandra
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 10:40 AM
So romantic! Beautiful ink Sandra. Congratulations on your win! xomo
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:22 PM
Hi, Maureen, thank you so much for your uplifting comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:12 AM
wow, loved this one, my favorite in this contest, congrats sweet Sandra ;)-luloo
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much, Laura! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra
Barden Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 5:55 AM
As incredibly mesmerizing and beautiful as that gif is, your poem is even MORE so, Sandra, and captivated me from git-to-gone - adore this write, my friend! Blessings and congrats on your SEVENTH PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
Haight Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Thank you very much, Gregory, for the challenging contest. I am so pleased that you found my poem worthy to be on this short list of winners, and thank you so much for your very supportive and uplifting comments! I look forward to your future contests. :) Sandra
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March 28, 2016 at 12:06 AM
Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome "Colourfication Win." ~LINDA~
Haight Avatar
March 28, 2016 at 3:56 PM
Thank you, Linda. Hugs, Sandra
Raven Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 6:23 PM
Hi Sandra, Congratulations on your win in the contest. As always, your words flow so easily across the page, opening such gentle images in the mind. This is a beautiful write Sandra, a kaleidoscopic rainbow of colour. You have painted an excellent canvas with your words. A seven i send to your pot of gold....Vlad.
Haight Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:51 AM
Thank you once again, Vlad, for your very supportive and complimentary comments....very encouraging and uplifting for sure. Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 4:21 PM
Outstanding and so beautiful Sandra! This will be hard to beat and I am sure it will take top honors! #7
Godwin Avatar
March 12, 2016 at 7:34 AM
Beautiful ... CayCay
Richards Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 1:17 PM
Oh, my....this is as glorious as watching the horizon itself.!! Will be hard to think of another poem to top this one!
Smith Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:01 AM
Colorfully sensual, Sandra. Good luck in the contest...Charlie
Haight Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 11:14 AM
Hi Charlie, thank you for your nice visit, positive comment and GL wishes! Much appreciated. Sandra
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