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Deep as the ocean Falls in love like rain But her heart is as cold as ice She's a vapor in the air. With soul as pure as the sea Her happiness rages like the river She is no different to a water She's something I can never hold.

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Date: 5/8/2017 11:36:00 AM
Poems come so naturally to you may friend.....I am a great fan of fluency with which you portray your emotions....And trust me I mean it...
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 5/10/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you :D
Date: 5/5/2017 8:11:00 PM
I agree with John down here. That is a great metaphor for someone that you can never hold.
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 5/10/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you :D
Date: 5/4/2017 5:39:00 AM
Great metaphor, Hans
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 5/10/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you :D
Date: 5/3/2017 9:05:00 AM
She is elusive...nicely penned
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Hansteven Selfa
Date: 5/10/2017 11:41:00 AM
Thank you :D

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