Water

It is flooding to me
now that I see
we are one
the river
the sea
you and me
we are
almost all water
all
h2o
you 
condensation
and I
the sweat on your brow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
March 7, 2017 at 2:41 AM
nice thought Maureen...:)
Bennett Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 5:59 PM
So true Maureen--deep thoughts and facts--Loved it !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
Smith Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Loved the first six lines, perfect...
Parker Avatar
March 6, 2017 at 3:27 PM
nice observation actually the entire universe is made from the same matter, the same building blocks..the last three lines are perfect
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March 6, 2017 at 4:58 PM
"we are stardust" ;) Ty Frederic
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