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It is flooding to me now that I see we are one the river the sea you and me we are almost all water all h2o you condensation and I the sweat on your brow

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Date: 3/7/2017 2:41:00 AM
nice thought Maureen...:)
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Date: 3/6/2017 5:59:00 PM
So true Maureen--deep thoughts and facts--Loved it !! ~~ Jeanie ~~
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Date: 3/6/2017 3:30:00 PM
Loved the first six lines, perfect...
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Date: 3/6/2017 3:27:00 PM
nice observation actually the entire universe is made from the same matter, the same building blocks..the last three lines are perfect
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Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 3/6/2017 4:58:00 PM
"we are stardust" ;) Ty Frederic

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