Water

Water
 i whispered

droplets pellucid 
means so much
releasing fret 
embracing soul 

carib of earth 
preserve humankind
 without you 
we all died dry 

gurgling your song
drains body 
corroborated intention 

keep you 

 clear
 clean 
fresh 

not silenced shall all  tongues
want you to remain
dont  keep silent 
sing out  loud 
its beauty

water
hear my calls
my intimate
is all yours

 ~ ( c ) sukmawati komala ~ 
25 february 2013

lifefree verse

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Lucilla Carrillo

March 5, 2013 at 9:08 AM

A poem about water - it's a beauty. Water is a very important element, without it we would die. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

Laura Breidenthal

February 26, 2013 at 1:45 AM

Water deserves more acknowledgement! Love your work! Always, Laura

Robert Pettit

February 25, 2013 at 8:36 PM

Water is something Mars lacks. Our planet earth should consider itself lucky.

Jeremy Martin

February 25, 2013 at 6:48 PM

I love this because it really does embody how it feels to be in physical contact with water. It almost parches you just by reading it, and I mean that in the very best of ways. The structure of the poem is like a column, reminiscent of water, too. This poem weeps with adoration and feeling.