Water


Our ubiquitous
Chemical substance, water
Essential to life




http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-5.php

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Mary Meade Stephenson

December 31, 2009 at 10:53 AM

So very true! Short and sweet yet holds a powerful message. Another excellent job James! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works. Many thanks too for your always kind words..all is much appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

Barbara Gorelick

November 8, 2009 at 3:41 PM

It seems here in California we either have to much at one time or not enough over the year. Enjoyed.! BG

November 6, 2009 at 5:45 PM

So true. Creative word choice. Interesting analogy. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Sara Kendrick

November 6, 2009 at 3:32 PM

Like the word ubiquitous. Keep writing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

November 6, 2009 at 2:39 PM

Wonderful roll of your wording.. so flowing ... just like the ocean water ... very essential is water to life... so lovely.. for a girl who loves the beach .. water is very essential ... always... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Geoffery Mchugh

November 6, 2009 at 2:16 PM

Clever Haiku. The subject matter is a pretty cool choice also.

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