Water

Our ubiquitous Chemical substance, water Essential to life http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/nature-5.php

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Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/31/2009 10:53:00 AM

So very true! Short and sweet yet holds a powerful message. Another excellent job James! Thanks so much for sharing and for taking the time to read my works. Many thanks too for your always kind words..all is much appreciated! Have a blessed day~Mary

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/8/2009 3:41:00 PM

It seems here in California we either have to much at one time or not enough over the year. Enjoyed.! BG

Date: 11/6/2009 5:45:00 PM

So true. Creative word choice. Interesting analogy. Thank you for sharing this one with us and for your kind comment. Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/6/2009 3:32:00 PM

Like the word ubiquitous. Keep writing. Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2009 2:39:00 PM

Wonderful roll of your wording.. so flowing ... just like the ocean water ... very essential is water to life... so lovely.. for a girl who loves the beach .. water is very essential ... always... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Geoffery Mchugh

Date: 11/6/2009 2:16:00 PM

Clever Haiku. The subject matter is a pretty cool choice also.