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A flash a gleam a sudden stream Slipping out of a hole like a snake Her strength her flowing escape A symbol of life she travels from hidden places by routes that she creates. Walking endlessly from rivers to seas She lives within you and me I hear her now without listening like I breathe without thinking She flows over rocks and drops without blinking Music to the ears a dozen different notes The pitter patter of rain The thrill of a rivulet or roar of spate Or just the constant lapping of the waves Flowing into cracks and crevices or even caves. 12.2.2021 Sponsor:Brian Strand Contest:All Yours Feb 12(1st Place)

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Date: 2/15/2021 9:41:00 AM
Carol, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderful write _Constance
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/16/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks dear Constance....much love :)
Date: 2/15/2021 8:05:00 AM
Very descriptive is this winning work. Congrats. Sara
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/15/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thanks dear Sara....hugs :)
Date: 2/12/2021 1:55:00 AM
- I can see a beautiful picture with your lines .... a lovely poem, Carol :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Carol Mitra
Date: 2/12/2021 2:40:00 AM
Thanks dear Anne-Lise hugs right back :)

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