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if we are a planet of water why do some go thirsty? 10/21/19 for 'Get in Touch with your Zen' contest Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Alexis Y.

Date: 11/16/2019 11:38:00 PM

Hi Michelle, This is deep. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. PS, I see the contest is finished. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 2:55:00 PM

Really good one! Well done x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2019 6:25:00 AM

Back for Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 8:01:00 PM

I knew I'd be seeing this one again. Congrats, Michelle.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2019 2:17:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Michelle :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 11/1/2019 11:33:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Michelle :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2019 8:48:00 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 11/1/2019 3:42:00 PM

Thanks for placing my poem in your contest, Richard, appreciate it!

Ann Foster

Date: 10/27/2019 4:11:00 PM

Because they drink from the deserts of their own hard hearts... so sad... loved your poem. Great write. Excellent words. Ann

Michelle Faulkner
Date: 10/31/2019 6:55:00 PM

Thank you , Ann - I was going for water as a metaphor for nourishment, both physical and emotional...

Pat Adams

Date: 10/26/2019 9:39:00 AM

What an ironic, Zen like question. I know the answer, but don't want to give it away. (Right....yeah that's what it is!"......80)....well done my friend!......pat

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/23/2019 10:13:00 PM

Water water everywhere, and not a drop to drink. ~ Perhaps... Great question, Michelle! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/4/2019 5:47:00 PM

Back with congrats on a great win in the contest, Michelle! ~ Dry Gulch Gershon

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/23/2019 7:09:00 PM

Oh, excellent question, and the sentiment behind it...should do well, i do hope so....

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:58:00 PM

VERY good one!!!

Judy Ball

Date: 10/22/2019 5:09:00 PM

A good question Michelle. According to the National Geographic some people live in areas where drinkable water is at a premium. A good write. God Bless, JB

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/22/2019 12:15:00 PM

Which one is better, which one is worst... Drowning in water or dying of thirst...

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/22/2019 10:29:00 AM

Such a good question! It wasn’t meant to be this way.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/21/2019 6:27:00 PM

They believe Coca-Cola is healthier? Good Luck! Aloha! Rico

Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/21/2019 2:04:00 PM

Good one Michelle :-) I really like this, good luck in the contest :-) x