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Water

if we are a
planet of water
why do some go thirsty?

10/21/19

for 'Get in Touch with your Zen' contest
Sponsor: Richard Lamoureux

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Alexis Y.

November 16, 2019 at 11:38 PM

Hi Michelle, This is deep. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. PS, I see the contest is finished. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis

Elaine Perrin

November 13, 2019 at 2:55 PM

Really good one! Well done x

Kim Rodrigues

November 2, 2019 at 6:25 AM

Back for Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

November 1, 2019 at 8:01 PM

I knew I'd be seeing this one again. Congrats, Michelle.

Anne-Lise Andresen

November 1, 2019 at 2:17 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Michelle :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

November 1, 2019 at 11:33 AM

Congratulations for your win Michelle :)

Richard Lamoureux

November 1, 2019 at 8:48 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

Michelle Faulkner

November 1, 2019 at 3:42 PM

Thanks for placing my poem in your contest, Richard, appreciate it!

Ann Foster

October 27, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Because they drink from the deserts of their own hard hearts... so sad... loved your poem. Great write. Excellent words. Ann

Michelle Faulkner

October 31, 2019 at 6:55 PM

Thank you , Ann - I was going for water as a metaphor for nourishment, both physical and emotional...

Pat Adams

October 26, 2019 at 9:39 AM

What an ironic, Zen like question. I know the answer, but don't want to give it away. (Right....yeah that's what it is!"......80)....well done my friend!......pat

Gershon Wolf

October 23, 2019 at 10:13 PM

Water water everywhere, and not a drop to drink. ~ Perhaps... Great question, Michelle! Warmest wishes, Gershon

Gershon Wolf

November 4, 2019 at 5:47 PM

Back with congrats on a great win in the contest, Michelle! ~ Dry Gulch Gershon

Harry Horsman

October 23, 2019 at 7:09 PM

Oh, excellent question, and the sentiment behind it...should do well, i do hope so....

Andrea Dietrich

October 22, 2019 at 5:58 PM

VERY good one!!!

Judy Ball

October 22, 2019 at 5:09 PM

A good question Michelle. According to the National Geographic some people live in areas where drinkable water is at a premium. A good write. God Bless, JB