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Water, Sun, Cloud

Water

Water flowing down
babbling, full of joyfulness
giving life to all

Sun

Soul of life are you
blazing ball of sparking fire
lighting up our world

Clouds

Gentle clouds drift by 
casting shadows over all
blanking out the sun


written 08/21/2013

Copyright © Shadow Hamilton | Year Posted 2013

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Skat A Date: 8/21/2013 2:14:00 PM the sun reflects the way it should on the second one... love all 3.... SKAT Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:11:00 PM ty Skat most encouraging Shadow x smile

Vassilis Comporozos Date: 8/21/2013 1:37:00 AM I especially liked the 1st and 3rd one. Nice try! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:12:00 PM hi Vassilis ty for visiting and enjoy my works Shadow x smile

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/21/2013 1:08:00 AM very nice, Sweetie! WAs it for any contest? Not that it has to be. Was just curious! Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:14:00 PM no just a write lol maybe one day. Ty Andrea for your time reading Shadow x smile

Honestly J.T. Date: 8/20/2013 10:21:00 PM Love the visuals. very descriptive Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:16:00 PM Hi Pj Haiku's are a word painting I always think ty for encouraging remarks Shadow x smile

Christine Phillips Date: 8/20/2013 7:04:00 PM Nice. The joy of nature is a magnificent delight. Login to Reply Shadow Hamilton Date: 8/21/2013 4:17:00 PM yes it is Christine and never the same always something new Shadow x smile