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Watching the Sunset In Maui

Pictures shared over the airwaves
Palm trees giving ever so gently
To tropical breezes are captured
As our forever moment in time.
With each sunrise comes the
Rich greens, soothingly calming blues
And gently comforting whites.
A breathtaking scenery of a canvas
Of unimaginable creation.
With each setting sun comes
Enriched hues of the primaries.
Blended reds, oranges,
Yellows and blues create stunning
Mixtures of color in and about the
Horizon slowly overtaking daylight
Seemingly setting the clouds ablaze.
The ocean mimics with darker tones
As the sky slowly closes its eye upon
Us holding our hearts just a bit longer.
Daily repetition allows us to
Visualize its blessing in the
Hopes of acceptance and
Appreciation of what we have,
Are given and are given in return.
Watching the sun set in Maui
Would be an unforgettable experience
But for now it remains as an
Instant snapshot of time and place
In present time zone’s past allowing
Visions of an everlasting
Memory bring a smile to my face
And peace in my heart
All in part due to the kindness of
A dear friend and his giving soul.
This in itself has been an
Amazingly wonderful experience. 
Thank you for sharing with me
This beautiful sunset in Maui.

Thank you Jerry. 

5/22/19

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Date: 6/30/2020 10:38:00 PM
Such a beautiful, uplifting write, Juanita...all the more poignant given the trouble Mali's experiencing these days. Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 3/22/2020 1:41:00 AM
Just inspirationally Beautiful... "A Fav" for me James
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/28/2020 8:18:00 PM
Thank you again Mr. Lee. Unfortunately most folks may never get the opportunity to travel, much like myself. Gratefully, as you've read, I have a friend that does and every time he goes on vacation, he shares his pics with me. That within itself, is sufficient enough for me.
Date: 3/5/2020 9:40:00 PM
I've heard the stories, but your poetic touch really brings Maui to life. Thank you so much, Juanita! Smiles, Gershon
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Juanita Smalls
Date: 3/14/2020 10:07:00 PM
Hello Gershon! Sorry I'm just seeing your comment. You're very welcome. I've never been to Maui myself but my friend who took his family there for a vacation sent me some pictures and they are stunning! He sent me bot day and night pics. Hence the title. He's also the inspiration behind my piece entitled California Sunrise. Thanks for your kind words and thanks for reading! Blessings.

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