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Watching the Sunrise

I watch the rising sun's radiant, rosy touch, change dawn's pale gray cheeks to a spreading pinkish blush. And as silver golden ribbons unfurl in the air, that's Heaven adding adornments to dawn's glowing hair. . Author's Note. If you, too, are inspired by sunrises and sunsets, I'd love to read your descriptions. Please post them here.

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Date: 8/27/2021 12:10:00 AM
Sunrise is wonderful, it affirms the new day...Delice
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Date: 6/18/2019 10:23:00 AM
I too, relate so well to sunrises. Several poems I have written evolve around them. Yours gives still more insight to the dawning of another day. Thanks for your contribution, and for comments you have made on my writings. Colan Hiatt
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Date: 7/13/2016 12:11:00 AM
I am currently watching the sun rise, Darlene. A lovely piece. Check out my Haiku 'Sunrise'. Viv x
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 7/13/2016 11:11:00 AM
So good to hear from you, Viv, yes, I will certainly read yours with pleasure for the sunrises we both enjoy.
Date: 6/10/2016 12:04:00 PM
what incredible personification - a joy to read Darlene:-) hugs Jan xx 7 http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sun_split_haiku_774250 and another that I love http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/sun_kissed_786216
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Darlene Gifford
Date: 6/10/2016 12:12:00 PM
Hi, Jan, Thanks for those kind words and your input. Blessings~~~ Darlene

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