Watching From the Balcony

Glancing just once over my shoulder
I see him quietly standing there
Please God , make my steps seem boulder
Don't let him see this fitful stare

He said that now he didn't want me
That in his life I had no place
But yet he seems to want to see
The evening shadows on my face.

I feel life going on around me
And with tears I must turn away
Lord, give me your strength I plea
A bit of my life he killed  today


For Iolanda"s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/4/2010 9:33:00 AM
I am late with my wishes, Barbara....somehow missed your poem, but congratulations on your win, and how nice to share this place with you! Such a melancholy poem...well done! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/3/2010 11:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Iolanda's "Untold Secrets" contest Barbara. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 7:31:00 PM
Interesting poem.. About my poem Poetic Limbo, Lusty thoughts once in awhile is cool its the acting out part one has to be careful with. Thanks for stopping by. I am a 3rd shift nurse at a treatment center for addicts and alcoholics... Take care, nice work.
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Date: 5/2/2010 5:52:00 PM
VERY Nice, I like how you did this. Congratulations, Barbara!
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Date: 5/1/2010 8:23:00 PM
Excellent poem, Barbara. Congratulations on your win. Guess we were thinking a bit along the same lines in our interpretations. I saw sadness too. But that's what I expect from my fellow LNC. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/1/2010 5:32:00 PM
Congratulations Barbara. Very nice. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:59:00 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem in Iolanda's contest with this wonderful Quatrain ...enjoy yur very special victory...luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/27/2010 8:24:00 AM
enjoyed reading today--good one.
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Date: 4/26/2010 7:53:00 PM
ENJOYED THE WRITE, GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST,,IRMA
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