Watching and Waiting

"Watching and Waiting" six sets of watchful eyes peer impishly surveying each move my footprint takes they try to appear waiting quite sheepishly as I stroll into the kitchen, the carpeting earthquakes. twenty-four feet hurriedly stand to touch the ground stalking my every step with rapid heartbeats their "big brother" prancing escalates to astound as I reach into the pantry for delicious treats. swift jumping and cajoling, strong serenade begins overpowered, I submit to demands and requests a brood of hungry canines and felines always wins how does one say "no" to rambunctious animal pets?
*For Black Eyed Susan's Biig Brother Watching You and Why Contest..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/10/2016 4:08:00 PM
I Love this poem....How true....David.
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Date: 3/13/2014 2:02:00 AM
such a sweet poem...SKAT
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Date: 7/16/2012 3:40:00 PM
Well hello My Jersey Girl.. How are you? I hope well . Another amazing piece from your deep anmd endless soul of words.. Proud to be your friend ... luv and hugs always Michael
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Date: 7/11/2012 12:22:00 PM
way to go ,sweets!.. congrats on you stunning win .. hope you are recovering fast.. :) hugggs!
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Date: 7/11/2012 6:26:00 AM
Linda-Marie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 7/10/2012 12:34:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's " Big Brother " contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/9/2012 8:00:00 PM
I like this. Pets are so dear and are so much fun. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2012 3:46:00 PM
Adorable and charming write Linda. Hugs
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Date: 7/9/2012 3:06:00 PM
congrats on your win Linda
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Date: 7/9/2012 2:42:00 PM
congratulations on your well-deserved win! Lori
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Date: 7/9/2012 1:50:00 PM
Linda Congrats on the win!!!
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Date: 7/9/2012 12:40:00 PM
Won 4th place.. thankxxx..
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Date: 7/9/2012 9:18:00 AM
So sweet, Linda-Marie. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/6/2012 11:06:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this sweet poem dear.Haven't been online lately..Its nice to l know you're still here.Hope you are fine ..big hugs
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Date: 7/2/2012 9:38:00 AM
awww, impossible to say no for sure : ) love this cute write, Linda-Marie
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Date: 6/30/2012 1:08:00 AM
Hey, Linda. You did same concept as I did!! I love how you did yours too. Using the 24 feet it was SO cute. really enjoyable poem.
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Date: 6/29/2012 8:36:00 PM
Oh Linda-Marie, aren't pets the greatest? I have a gorgeous Yorkie that I love with all my heart...he is still a puppy...my pupper snapper! I love how you wrote this poem with the mystery of who those eyes belong to and what they are up to! Quite the awesome write my friend, awesome! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/29/2012 8:13:00 PM
our pets are so fun..but they do run the show sometimes ..especially treats time.. and it feels like "big brother" OVERTAKES THE HOUSEHOLD.. ENJOY POETS WITH LUV..
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