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Watching a Storm Through a Window

Haze and gray clouds maze down and shroud the sky; as rain falls thunder claps cry aloud. And upon the porch, a slippery plank lie; a dangerous fate; a predestined time. But then its to late you trip and commence shattering glass fragments. Slit wrists and bloody fingertips drenched in soggy wine drips as you slip to the floor; drift off and snore. Blood stains and gore as you bleed out and breathe out no more; drift on to explore; ride off on the storm. http://www.lulu.com/content/paperback-book/one-for-the-lift-ticket/7970992

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/5/2009 9:09:00 AM
Great piece!...sounds gloomy but original...
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Date: 4/26/2009 12:01:00 PM
A great write...it is grasping and potent..Thank you for your comment... Always, Farah
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Date: 4/22/2009 8:53:00 AM
There is so power in your write ... so much vision of the beat poets, and yet so original, I love them.
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