Watched It

Watched it, well not IT, not the balloon
with a clown attached to it.
Watched a true story better left alone
I’m all alone
I must dispense the dust cover of fear
My pillow is mauled
in toss and turn
My hand must not rest over the cliff
I wake up into full sunshine
as if
all the light that has ever been
hits me on the chin and cheeks

Funny how the dark tucks you in
and the dawn pretends
you’ve never been
and never will
be frightened again
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Hind Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 3:42 PM
What deep introspection, dear Kim- and wow, what use of metaphor- you better never stop writing, :)
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 4:52 PM
I appreciate you at every turn! Bless you!
Greenhough Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 1:50 PM
Enjoyable, encouraging story. I find sleep to be a step into the unknown. Your poem is a testament to sleeping eyes fears.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 4:52 PM
Always a joy to wake up and see a brand new day!
DiMino Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 7:42 AM
Nor asleep again, in the oblivious sense...forever our brighter dawns. Lovely, deep poetry. Brilliant!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 10:05 AM
Thank you, Joe! Blessings!
Rolland Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 12:47 AM
the mood we are is important, but sometimes we don't choose, enjoyed your touching poem yann
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 6:47 AM
Thank you so much! Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 10:09 PM
I may not have interpreted this correctly, but maybe you watched a scary movie? I do all the time and it doesn't affect my sleep. However, I get this thing like a horrible dread if I wake up close to morning time and I absolutely can't get back to sleep without a sleeping pill. I wonder if it's that same dread you wrote of here
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 6:48 AM
I watched one of those true stories that haunted my sleep! Yikes! Sensitive
Onclaud Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 8:10 PM
a wonderful sampling of how night triggers this sense of anxiety...well done, Kim!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Sure does! Thank you, Nette!
Tor Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 6:26 PM
I think Gershon nailed it Kim almost identical to my thoughts on your Poetry great minds think alike, lol Just kidding. God bless you...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 7:08 PM
Thank you, Mike! :)
Wolf Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 6:18 PM
I really like your treatment of the cold sweat of night-fear giving way to the amnesia of dawn and daylight. So resonant, Kim. Thanks, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2024 at 7:07 PM
Thank you so much! Hugs
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