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Reason A. Poteet

Poet Crystalline

Wasted Leaves

Sadly, no quantum leaping beneath
our huge red oak tree's autumn sleep.

November 22, 2014

Copyright © Reason A. Poteet | Year Posted 2014

11th gradeautumnchildrenleavingcrystalline

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November 28, 2014 at 9:51 AM

Lovely, Reason; these poems have been a pleasure to read Congratulations on your win.

November 25, 2014 at 8:40 AM

Congratulations on your win, I can't remember did you win first place? Lots of Love.

Reason A. Poteet

November 26, 2014 at 10:02 AM

Thanks Marcus, you are sounding more like a PS winner every day. Curious as why you asked? This one got a 9 from Rick which is remarkable in itself? But I do have 33 - 1's elsewhere. Congratulations on your placement at 28 among the winners here. You deserve the recognition.

November 25, 2014 at 8:37 AM

I love, love, love, love this Crystaline. You can tell your son that his light shined on this inspired write. This is an unquestioned Fav for me.

Reason A. Poteet

November 26, 2014 at 10:03 AM

Thanks, Maurice, glad you liked it.

Brenda Meier-Hans

November 24, 2014 at 2:02 PM

I love this brilliant Crystalline. Congratulations on your win Reason.

November 24, 2014 at 10:11 AM

I see your name is on the winner's list..It was awesome to see it there..Creative work needs a congrats..Sara

Reason A. Poteet

November 26, 2014 at 10:41 AM

Wow! Sara, thanks. Coming from such a talented writer this is good news. Thanks again.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 24, 2014 at 9:47 AM

Very creative...congrats, Reason!! :))

November 24, 2014 at 9:36 AM

This was a unique approach and I am glad I found it. Congrats.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

November 24, 2014 at 9:26 AM

quantum leaping wow great Reason . Congrats on win love rajat

Andrea Dietrich

November 23, 2014 at 10:23 PM

this one is really clever!!! congrats on your win.

Reason A. Poteet

November 24, 2014 at 6:19 AM

thanks, Andrea

November 23, 2014 at 11:53 AM

beautifully penned many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Reason A. Poteet

November 24, 2014 at 6:20 AM

Jan, appreciate the read and remark

Carrie Richards

November 22, 2014 at 9:24 AM

Ahhh.......my favorite so far ! Lovely work !

Reason A. Poteet

November 24, 2014 at 6:19 AM

a special thanks, Carrie, glad you like it.

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