Wasted - Another Tragedy

Busking for breakfast in Kabul a puffed up dream idealology haze delineating freedom as mournful tunes offset tranquility Crowds gather to gawk sentimental shards of shrapnel life left unguarded wasted away another fateful scene screams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Downing  Avatar
December 30, 2017 at 1:56 PM
Great write my dear Dear Tim... hugs and smiles :)
Hopper Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 11:05 AM
This is excellent. I have to pull out my dictionary really quick.
Smith Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 2:33 PM
“When will we ever learn?” Sad way to start a New Year. Well done Tim...
Andresen Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 12:53 PM
- Tim, touching written .... the last verse says it all - Happy New Year! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 7:13 AM
A wonderful opening line,"Busking for breakfast in Kabul." Nice imagery ... All the best Tim
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