Waste Land

Waste Land(Than-bauk)


A place of rife
Without life goal
Is strife wasteland.



This poem is Unique because it explains the way political leaders hold on to power and 
oppress the masses;and when the masses cannot take it any longer it results to revolution or war making the land desolate i.e waste, leading to brutal killings etc

the special line is.......Is strife wasteland......

O.A
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 1:10 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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November 5, 2011 at 10:33 PM
;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 9:05 PM
Congratulations on a fine line!
Sweetheart Avatar
November 5, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Congrats Olusegun on another brilliant win for this unique line luv..
Freeman Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 11:10 AM
Wisdon of truth, Olusegun...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Wow!! powerful write!!!!! Congrats on your well deserverd win!!---Lori
Johnson Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 4:43 AM
too much bloody war, always here, since before? well done mate.
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:17 AM
A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR
Ramage Avatar
September 2, 2011 at 12:53 AM
Beautiful poem and thoughtful dedication. Lee
Beadnall Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 6:44 PM
congrats on your win in Olusegun,blessings from Paul
Neels Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 3:46 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Olusegun!!
Brown Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 2:13 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
Johnson Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Great dedication. Congratulations.
Williams Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 11:29 AM
hey Olusequn, congrats on yourwin, great dedication..David
Sweetheart Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Congrats olusegun on your wonderful winning poem so profound for this contest ..great win and dedication too luv..
Mehta Avatar
September 1, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Congratulations on the win ,Olu
Ekpemandu Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 5:05 PM
a lot of depth in these three lines...lovely bro
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 7:02 PM
Thanks to you,my brother.
Brown Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 8:04 AM
I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Olusegun. I have enjoyed reading yours as usual and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 7:06 PM
Thanks to you-Carol, for your encouragement.you are forever blessed...
Mehta Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Nice tribute you have paid with this Tan-bauk, Olu
Arowolo Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 7:09 PM
Thanks for your appreciation,Dr.Ram.
Jones Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:44 PM
yes
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