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Waste Land

Waste Land(Than-bauk) A place of rife Without life goal Is strife wasteland. This poem is Unique because it explains the way political leaders hold on to power and oppress the masses;and when the masses cannot take it any longer it results to revolution or war making the land desolate i.e waste, leading to brutal killings etc the special line is.......Is strife wasteland...... O.A

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Date: 11/7/2011 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Impressive Line"contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2011 10:33:00 PM
;-) CONGRATULATIONS, thank you for supporting my contest... I'm just dropping by to give everyone a warm congratulations and gratitude from the heart. ((you may get this comment more than once, if you entered more than one of my contest this week)) Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/5/2011 9:05:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine line!
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Date: 11/5/2011 6:06:00 PM
Congrats Olusegun on another brilliant win for this unique line luv..
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Date: 9/3/2011 11:10:00 AM
Wisdon of truth, Olusegun...congratulations on your poem's worthiness. Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/3/2011 10:06:00 AM
Wow!! powerful write!!!!! Congrats on your well deserverd win!!---Lori
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Date: 9/3/2011 4:43:00 AM
too much bloody war, always here, since before? well done mate.
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Date: 9/3/2011 3:17:00 AM
A Fifth Place Win Congratulations. CR
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Date: 9/2/2011 12:53:00 AM
Beautiful poem and thoughtful dedication. Lee
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Date: 9/1/2011 6:44:00 PM
congrats on your win in Olusegun,blessings from Paul
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Date: 9/1/2011 3:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest Olusegun!!
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Date: 9/1/2011 2:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance La France's "A Short Poem, Please" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2011 1:07:00 PM
Great dedication. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:29:00 AM
hey Olusequn, congrats on yourwin, great dedication..David
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Date: 9/1/2011 11:19:00 AM
Congrats olusegun on your wonderful winning poem so profound for this contest ..great win and dedication too luv..
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Date: 9/1/2011 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win ,Olu
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Date: 8/31/2011 5:05:00 PM
a lot of depth in these three lines...lovely bro
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 8/31/2011 7:02:00 PM
Thanks to you,my brother.
Date: 8/31/2011 8:04:00 AM
I have been reading some very overwhelming poetry this morning Olusegun. I have enjoyed reading yours as usual and hope to be reading more of it soon. Love, Carol
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 8/31/2011 7:06:00 PM
Thanks to you-Carol, for your encouragement.you are forever blessed...
Date: 8/31/2011 7:38:00 AM
Nice tribute you have paid with this Tan-bauk, Olu
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Olusegun Arowolo
Date: 8/31/2011 7:09:00 PM
Thanks for your appreciation,Dr.Ram.
Date: 8/30/2011 7:44:00 PM
yes
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