Wassamassaw Bay

Bob and Hannah went to fish in Wassamassaw Bay.
They told their mom they would return for church so they could pray.
But both of them lost track of time, returning way past noon.
The sun was down and it was dark and there was a full moon.

“What do you have to say to me, for it is very late.
The moon is up, the sun is down, your meals are on your plates.
You haven’t done your chores and now it’s almost time for bed.
The dog is barking angrily for he wants to be fed.”

“We are so very sorry but we did lose track of time.
There was commotion on the Bay although there was no crime.
And when we tried to leave for home the officer said, ‘No.’
He said we’d have to stay a while and that we could not go.”

“He said he had some questions so we would have to stay.
We told him that we had to go to church so we could pray.
The officer said we could go after we told the tale.
Of how in Wassamassaw Bay, we caught a big white whale!”


By Samia Arroyo for David Williams' Palindrome mad contest.
Bob
Hannah
Wassamassaw
mom
noon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/30/2012 1:28:00 AM
and I see you won with this one. AWEsome. that was a hard contest.
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:08:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Thanks to you again ...Samia
Date: 6/30/2012 1:27:00 AM
hahaha. this is very cute. Those two just don't know when to stop with the fish tails!!
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Date: 6/30/2012 6:08:00 AM
Hey Andrea, Thank you so very much ...Samia
Date: 4/25/2012 1:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work with this creative write..Sara
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:11:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much. I do appreciate it! :)
Date: 4/23/2012 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Samia. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/23/2012 7:58:00 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you very, very much! :)
Date: 4/22/2012 2:30:00 PM
Great story of palindrome proportions and what great rhyme!! Congrats to you, dear Samia! Wonderful fun here! Love, gwendolen
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:01:00 PM
Hi Gwendolen, Thank you so much. And your poem was fantastic! :)
Date: 4/22/2012 2:10:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Samia. Excellent piece. Great write. Enjoyed. Kudos. hugs, Ralph.
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:00:00 PM
Hi Ralph, Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it and I appreciate your comment ...Samia :)
Date: 4/22/2012 1:25:00 PM
Well done Samia, Congratulations xx
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:26:00 PM
Thank you so much Mandy! :)
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/22/2012 1:25:00 PM
Hi Joann, Thank you very much! :)
Date: 4/22/2012 1:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this very nice poem.
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Date: 4/12/2012 5:23:00 AM
Hi Vie, Thank you very, very much! :)
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Date: 4/11/2012 4:16:00 PM
Hi Anne Lise, I thank you very kindly! :)
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Date: 4/11/2012 4:15:00 PM
Hi elliott, Thank you so much! I appreciate it very much. :)
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:39:00 PM
Samia.....good work ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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Date: 4/11/2012 3:02:00 PM
Spectacular write. Wining wishes.
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