Wassamassaw Bay

Bob and Hannah went to fish in Wassamassaw Bay.
They told their mom they would return for church so they could pray.
But both of them lost track of time, returning way past noon.
The sun was down and it was dark and there was a full moon.

“What do you have to say to me, for it is very late.
The moon is up, the sun is down, your meals are on your plates.
You haven’t done your chores and now it’s almost time for bed.
The dog is barking angrily for he wants to be fed.”

“We are so very sorry but we did lose track of time.
There was commotion on the Bay although there was no crime.
And when we tried to leave for home the officer said, ‘No.’
He said we’d have to stay a while and that we could not go.”

“He said he had some questions so we would have to stay.
We told him that we had to go to church so we could pray.
The officer said we could go after we told the tale.
Of how in Wassamassaw Bay, we caught a big white whale!”


By Samia Arroyo for David Williams' Palindrome mad contest.
Bob
Hannah
Wassamassaw
mom
noon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 1:28 AM
and I see you won with this one. AWEsome. that was a hard contest.
Salama  Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Hey Andrea, Thanks to you again ...Samia
Dietrich Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 1:27 AM
hahaha. this is very cute. Those two just don't know when to stop with the fish tails!!
Salama  Avatar
June 30, 2012 at 6:08 AM
Hey Andrea, Thank you so very much ...Samia
Kendrick Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work with this creative write..Sara
Salama  Avatar
April 25, 2012 at 1:11 PM
Hi Sara, Thank you so much. I do appreciate it! :)
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:26 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Samia. Love, Carol
Salama  Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 7:58 AM
Hi Carol, Thank you very, very much! :)
Song Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:30 PM
Great story of palindrome proportions and what great rhyme!! Congrats to you, dear Samia! Wonderful fun here! Love, gwendolen
Salama  Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:01 PM
Hi Gwendolen, Thank you so much. And your poem was fantastic! :)
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:10 PM
Congrats on your win, Samia. Excellent piece. Great write. Enjoyed. Kudos. hugs, Ralph.
Salama  Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 7:00 PM
Hi Ralph, Thank you so much. I'm glad that you liked it and I appreciate your comment ...Samia :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Well done Samia, Congratulations xx
Salama  Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:26 PM
Thank you so much Mandy! :)
Salama  Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Hi Joann, Thank you very much! :)
Grisetti Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest with this very nice poem.
Salama  Avatar
April 12, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Hi Vie, Thank you very, very much! :)
Salama  Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 4:16 PM
Hi Anne Lise, I thank you very kindly! :)
Salama  Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 4:15 PM
Hi elliott, Thank you so much! I appreciate it very much. :)
Andresen Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 3:39 PM
Samia.....good work ! - oxox Anne-Lise
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April 11, 2012 at 3:02 PM
Spectacular write. Wining wishes.
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