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on valentines day  ~
night of hot passion cancelled
punctured water bed  ~






Written on 3rd February 2019

For Valentine senyru  poetry contest

Sponsored by Tania Kitchin.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/14/2019 9:10:00 AM

Good humor. Thanks for stopping by. Sara

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/14/2019 10:41:00 AM

Thank you Sara, glad you liked it. Tom.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 2/13/2019 11:49:00 AM

How funny! I scared of home floods because I've been there, done that but I could not resist laughing - thank you for that. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/13/2019 12:26:00 PM

Thanks CayCay, I think many of us have had bad experiences with water, I was doing some plumbing upstairs and the pipe came apart under pressure, got down stairs in about two seconds to turn off the supply. I was lucky as it didn't do too much damage. Tom.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 2/13/2019 1:57:00 AM

cute ... very cute.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/13/2019 2:13:00 AM

Thank you Pashang. Tom.

Paul Callus

Date: 2/10/2019 3:28:00 AM

Oh dear...while others celebrate with flowers, chocolate, champagne and kisses, this couple have other things on their mind!! Perhaps we can give them a hand to clean up:) Regards // paul

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/10/2019 5:21:00 AM

Thanks Paul , bring plenty of sponges lol Tom.

Paul Callus
Date: 2/10/2019 3:29:00 AM

I notice that this is a winner, Tom, so...congratulations!

Maureen McGreavy

Date: 2/9/2019 2:31:00 PM

Yay! Back with congrats! xomo

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/10/2019 2:16:00 AM

Thanks very much Maureen, Tom.

JAN ALLISON

Date: 2/8/2019 5:12:00 PM

ha ha ha love it tom:-) congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/9/2019 7:50:00 AM

Thanks Jan, never appealed to me, a water bed. If you forget to cut your toenails then you might hit disaster lol. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/7/2019 7:32:00 PM

back with congrats. you scored well with this one.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/8/2019 1:59:00 AM

Thank you very much Andrea, Tom.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/7/2019 4:17:00 PM

Tom,back with congratulations on your win... Hugs Eve~`*

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Eve. Tom.

Sunshine Smile

Date: 2/7/2019 1:01:00 PM

- Congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 4:40:00 PM

Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom.

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/7/2019 8:24:00 AM

Lol! Tom, Their special night was ruined because of a water bed. I bet they won't get another water bed! Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 8:33:00 AM

Thanks Alexis, no its terra firma from now on lol. Tom

THE BARON

Date: 2/7/2019 5:33:00 AM

So funny - love it - congrats

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 7:44:00 AM

Thank you T.B. happy you liked it. Tom.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 2/7/2019 5:02:00 AM

Tom, very well done and hilarious, congratulations on your winning placement!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 7:43:00 AM

Thank you very much Tania, happy you liked it. Thanks also for hosting. Tom.

Vera Duggan

Date: 2/6/2019 11:42:00 PM

Hi Tom, omg what a nightmare that would be, good luck with the contest and take care.......Vera

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 12:27:00 AM

Thanks Vera, happy you enjoyed it. Tom

Sandra Weiss

Date: 2/6/2019 8:53:00 PM

Sorry, thats bad new, Tom. But it may be a contest winner. Good luck!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/7/2019 12:28:00 AM

Thanks Sandra, it would certainly put the damper on things lol. Tom.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 2/6/2019 3:28:00 PM

Never good but, on Valentine's Day...that bites! Good luck in the contest.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/6/2019 4:39:00 PM

Thanks very much M.L. Tom.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/6/2019 9:07:00 AM

This is just great, Tom! Hope it wins the whole shebang!!! Hilarious, my friend! :) gw

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/6/2019 11:57:00 AM

Haha, glad you liked it Gershon, certainly a washout.

Eve Roper

Date: 2/6/2019 8:17:00 AM

A very good one, Tom, good luck in the contest.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/6/2019 11:52:00 AM

Thanks very much Eve, Tom.

Carol Connell

Date: 2/5/2019 12:59:00 PM

Definitely more than a wet blanket. You've penned a humorous senryu, Tom.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/5/2019 4:20:00 PM

Thanks very much Carol. Tom

Maureen McGreavy

Date: 2/5/2019 7:19:00 AM

Hahahh!! Oh I think we have a winner. So funny, so good Tom! I love it. My best to you in the contest. xomo

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/5/2019 4:19:00 PM

Thank you Maureen, glad you liked it. Tom.

Sunshine Smile

Date: 2/5/2019 5:20:00 AM

- I just want to say: Today is February 5th ... enjoy the day, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/5/2019 5:49:00 AM

Haha you had me puzzled (senior moment ) thanks Sunshine, I've corrected it. Have a good day too. Tom.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/4/2019 5:25:00 PM

hello Tom, this poor woman did not have a good Valentine's Day. Well may be next time. Have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/6/2019 12:13:00 PM

I have been there done that, when I had the house in Wiarton with my husband. Have a nice day my friend.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/4/2019 10:47:00 PM

Their moment lost having to clear up all the water that leaked everywhere.

Timothy McGuire

Date: 2/4/2019 5:22:00 PM

Funny! I am old enough to remember a water bed.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/4/2019 10:46:00 PM

Have never tried them, I dont know if I'd fancy them, that fear of drowning lol.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/4/2019 5:22:00 PM

Hello Tom, I have no balance on icy driveways or sidewalks. When the snow is too deep i also have a problems walking. I am commenting on my poem here because I accidentally deleted you out. That will not happen again.have a nice evening my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/5/2019 2:24:00 PM

Thank you my friend.

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/4/2019 10:44:00 PM

I use snow chains when its really slippy. No worries about the comment, I've done that myself. Tom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/4/2019 4:48:00 PM

haha!!

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/4/2019 10:42:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, last I heard they were trying to book a hotel room lol.

nette onclaud

Date: 2/4/2019 3:35:00 PM

lol, what an unwanted disaster, tom... sooo good!....huggs

Tom Cunningham
Date: 2/4/2019 3:45:00 PM

Thanks Nette, glad you liked it. Tom.