Washed Presumptively

Went down to the river
each time I sang
and washed presumptively
the flesh of kin
down, down, down
with knees bent
unfolded and rent
circled the floors
each time I sang
and raised the roof
and arms in praise
‘tis not enough to say
‘tis a start not lame
to accept His holy name
into your heart
down, down, down
in the burial tub
not shamed nor shoved
but proofed
Went down to the river
he did…he did
and brought his kids
each time I sang
and didn’t know
the refrain
my brain is too small
too weak, not all
that good a matchup
for the King
for the smiles He brings
when the robes are light
and they bring up all
onto the wall
certificates
down, down, down
to the store
not three but four
digging up the old old song
for just a while
my child in a frame
the whole world gained
NO…that is not it
it is for such a time as this
a family close knit
one returned to church
God gives back
threefold
folding my knees
holding my heart
down in the river
remember who parted the sea
remember who walked on the sea
kin came up from the water, free

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Date: 7/26/2024 12:44:00 AM
ohh, the psalmic effect of your song lifts the imagery to greater heights...beautiful Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Nette! Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 7/25/2024 10:54:00 PM
You are a grateful, wonderfully humble and blessed child of your Lord and Master, Who is loathed by billions on planet earth. Some, cannot bear to hear his name. Others think the world just happened? And they know more? You Think I’m kidding. This one chilled me totally by a poet here.” I know more than God and Albert Einstein put together.” I never wrote him again.. great poem Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 7:15:00 AM
God shows us in all sorts of ways that no matter how He does it many won’t choose life. But for even one that repents and believes there is applause in heaven. The joy of my heart was multiplied, such is the love of God.
Date: 7/25/2024 9:26:00 AM
This seems like a poem of forgiveness. It is very beautiful. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 12:52:00 PM
I prayed for my son in law to get baptized and not only him but my two grandsons. God is good. <3
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