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Washed Presumptively

Went down to the river each time I sang and washed presumptively the flesh of kin down, down, down with knees bent unfolded and rent circled the floors each time I sang and raised the roof and arms in praise ‘tis not enough to say ‘tis a start not lame to accept His holy name into your heart down, down, down in the burial tub not shamed nor shoved but proofed Went down to the river he did…he did and brought his kids each time I sang and didn’t know the refrain my brain is too small too weak, not all that good a matchup for the King for the smiles He brings when the robes are light and they bring up all onto the wall certificates down, down, down to the store not three but four digging up the old old song for just a while my child in a frame the whole world gained NO…that is not it it is for such a time as this a family close knit one returned to church God gives back threefold folding my knees holding my heart down in the river remember who parted the sea remember who walked on the sea kin came up from the water, free

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Date: 7/26/2024 12:44:00 AM
ohh, the psalmic effect of your song lifts the imagery to greater heights...beautiful Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 7:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear Nette! Hugs and blessings xx
Date: 7/25/2024 10:54:00 PM
You are a grateful, wonderfully humble and blessed child of your Lord and Master, Who is loathed by billions on planet earth. Some, cannot bear to hear his name. Others think the world just happened? And they know more? You Think I’m kidding. This one chilled me totally by a poet here.” I know more than God and Albert Einstein put together.” I never wrote him again.. great poem Pangie xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/26/2024 7:15:00 AM
God shows us in all sorts of ways that no matter how He does it many won’t choose life. But for even one that repents and believes there is applause in heaven. The joy of my heart was multiplied, such is the love of God.
Date: 7/25/2024 9:26:00 AM
This seems like a poem of forgiveness. It is very beautiful. <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/25/2024 12:52:00 PM
I prayed for my son in law to get baptized and not only him but my two grandsons. God is good. <3

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