Lisa Ricci Poet Haiku

Washed By Waves

"washed by waves"

with yesterday gone
washed by waves looking beyond
reflect now anew 

exposed for all
tides call this rare moment
with open arms

each juncture unveils
washed by waves revealing light
take hold wonderment

SkyWatcher
03-14-23

this was my attempt at a haiku suite
thank you

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Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2023 at 7:46 AM This is beautiful Lisa Ricci March 21, 2023 at 4:41 AM Hello Andrea. Good Morning. Thank you ever so much. For all of you who write in the haiku and senryu format I have the utmost respect of your executions to all the uniqueness of the voice and tone etc. Have a wonderful morning and day. Thank you again and I will see you on your page. Blessings

Fin Chuuk March 15, 2023 at 9:34 PM Forget about me, can’t do it. Lol. I think you did a fabulous job. :) Lisa Ricci March 17, 2023 at 5:00 AM Hi Fin. Good Morning or Good Afternoon. Thank you ever so much. How very gracious. Truly. I have the utmost respect for all who continuously write in the haiku and senryu format(s). It is a language all its own. Have a wonderful day. Thank you again. Take care and keep enjoying poetrysoup. (smile)

Daniel Turner March 15, 2023 at 6:52 AM I'm no haiku officianado, Lisa but I do admire you for trying something new. Keep penning:) Lisa Ricci March 15, 2023 at 7:56 AM Hello Daniel. Thank you very much. Truly. How gracious of you. I truly do have respect for all of you who continuously write a haiku or senyru for they are formats and languages all their own. Have a wonderful day with poetry and poetrysoup. Blessings always. (smile)

Elizabeth Feeley March 15, 2023 at 4:25 AM Good morning Lisa, I like how you have centered these haiku to give the sense of successive waves. Lovely images. - Elizabeth Lisa Ricci March 15, 2023 at 5:36 AM Hello Elizabeth. It is very nice to meet you. Thank you ever so much for your generous and gracious review and commentary. Truly. For all of you who continuously write in the haiku and senryu format you have my admiration. Enjoy the morning and day and poetry and poetrysoup as well. (smile)

Victor Buhagiar March 15, 2023 at 3:19 AM You did very well. Three beautiful haikus Lisa Ricci March 15, 2023 at 3:22 AM Hello beautiful Victor. Thank you very much. I truly have such respect for those who write in this form. Have a wonderful day filled with peace and much more. Love and Blessings always. (smile)