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Wash Day

Wash day With clothes on lines Frozen sheets without life Winters' breath blows intense harshness Secrets revealed between two broken hearts Sadness entwined between the two No hope of warm breezes Now's the time for Wash day

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Date: 1/28/2010 9:33:00 AM
Wow this is an excellent write Virginia. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:27:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Virginia.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:18:00 PM
Interesting. I will have to look this Rictameter up in the styles of poetry. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/27/2010 1:16:00 PM
Creative use of this challenging form. Nice images to convey your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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