Wash Day

Wash day With clothes on lines Frozen sheets without life Winters' breath blows intense harshness Secrets revealed between two broken hearts Sadness entwined between the two No hope of warm breezes Now's the time for Wash day
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January 28, 2010 at 9:33 AM
Wow this is an excellent write Virginia. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol
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January 28, 2010 at 12:27 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Virginia.Rgds Brian
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January 27, 2010 at 1:18 PM
Interesting. I will have to look this Rictameter up in the styles of poetry. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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January 27, 2010 at 1:16 PM
Creative use of this challenging form. Nice images to convey your thoughts. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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