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Was That Word Buttercup

Poems creep in like spiders, capturing me in web so fair. Poems slip in like mice, sticky traps holding them in place. Poems prance in like majorettes, throwing batons in the air. Sci-Fi dances around in my muse’s brain, taking all the space. Poems twirl around my dendrite highway, waking me up. Poems shake me off the bed, landing me squarely on the floor. I hear the last line, and I think “was that word buttercup?” Poems laugh at my consternation, their humor I deplore. Poems slide by on the wings of undiscovered pretty galaxies. They jump into my head at restaurants when I cannot find a pin. Poems dive bomb my bed at night, witch-like in their hex-ease. They throw themselves at me in bathrooms; I simply cannot win. I do the best I can though, amusing poems in ways I do not dream. They throw down words I have never heard, and so I look them up. Poems own me, taking me hostage in a pretty hostage stream. Did you hear that? I have to know. Was that word buttercup?

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Date: 7/11/2020 2:33:00 PM
only one thing I disagree with here. Why do you say "their humor I deplore" the humor is your awesome wit, Caren. A fave on thee here.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/11/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you my friend; I blame the poems and the muse for everything.
Date: 7/11/2020 1:55:00 PM
Yes, it was “buttercup.” What a perfectly lovely combination like one held under the chin, twirled, swirled, smiling ;) :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/11/2020 6:46:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim. I appreciate it.
Date: 7/11/2020 6:45:00 AM
As you write you are giving of self, true heart and golden verses my friend. Such is the nature of a true poet. Let your gifts shine. A nd may blessing be upon you for it. God bless.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/11/2020 6:47:00 PM
Thank you so much Robert. I really appreciate this lovely comment my friend.
Date: 7/11/2020 12:58:00 AM
Caren, You and the galaxy got it right. The word was buttercup. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/11/2020 6:47:00 PM
I am grinning so hard, my teeth are falling out now Richard.

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