Was It Right?

I hope i did whats right for u,
becuz this pain i feel is almost unbearable..,
and right now i wish i could say goodnight,
as id die. ,
But instead ill sing ur favorite lullaby.
I may look quite calm,
I might be quite happy.
But on the inside I'm screaming,
inside im swimming,
in a sea of confusion.
PLease dont hate me, 
please dont scar,
id hate to have never held you in my arms.

I hope i did whats right for u,
because the pain i feel is almost unbearable.
I feel myself fading,
I am hurting so badly that i feel numb.
The tears are still rolling down my cheeks.
And baby I feel like I need your love.
I just hope you dont hate me.
I did this for you.
And now I want to bleed anew.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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November 20, 2010 at 11:55 PM
"as id die". This is an insult to literature. You should be jailed for writing something this bad.
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