Was Adam Or Eve First Up His Sleeve

There was God all alone in the world
   Nature and wildlife merely doing His bidding
Who to create first, Adam or Eve?
   You want to be TOLD how to make Adam?
                           ~ Are you kidding?
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Barry-Nishanian Avatar
June 18, 2019 at 10:15 PM
"Told how"...lol my friend.
Wolf Avatar
June 19, 2019 at 6:44 PM
Glad you like it, Barbara. :) gw
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 6:18 PM
Too much GW--really too much as my imaginative thought would put Picasso to shame GW, Aloha William
Leffanta Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 4:44 PM
Perish the thought! Aloha! Rico
Romios Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 1:19 PM
I think HaShem knew what he was doing.)) Though we non-gods seem to think we think we are significantly better than Hashem. Good luck to anyone with that rationale. Panagiota
Wilson Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:33 AM
"Oh You Kid!", Maybe there'd be more doing of Hashem's Bidding and far less "Skidding" if "Ridding" of Adam and Eve's propensity for "Slidding" into Human Self Ego Bidding! Gershon, You're Ever Clever Thank You! Note: Shavous True to Us was "Cleaned Up"
Blown Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 4:57 AM
nice write...if g.. didn't know which to create first (a... or e..) then sex was not an issue...there were no sexes... a... and e.. could have been clones... so, g.. did all this shit on purpose... what a f...u. eh!? : )
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:14 AM
Don't worry, S.B. Sometimes the s___ just has to hit the proverbial fan!! :) gw
Blown Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 4:59 AM
sorry for the rant...but some things are all in the head
Otieng Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 1:10 AM
Hahahaha. Gershon. Very funny in a different way. This had me thinking about the creation story, so God created Adam and Eve as Adults. This means they didn't experience the childhood life. It seems they were never kids before. Am I kidding?
Wolf Avatar
June 13, 2019 at 9:13 AM
Greetings, Samuel, and thank you for your comment and query. As a matter of fact, you are absolutely correct in your assumption that Adam and Eve WERE created as full-blown adults. Mind-boggling, isn't it...Just another way that the Creator of the Universe is so beyond our ken, however we anthropomorphize what He does...Thanks again, and Best Wishes, Gershon
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