Warriors

Cold granite warms our folded hands, fearsome warriors of intent prayer. Content not content to stay on surface, each breath kindles Spirit flare. Cogency calls kingdom come, tongues of a few faithful do declare.

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/22/2024 5:06:00 PM

Beautiful - prayers make a difference truly...

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/20/2024 4:39:00 AM

Kim, yes there are those of honor who we owe a lot to. It's nice to see an ode that praises. Smiles!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2024 6:32:00 AM

Thank you, Duke! Prayer is powerful.

R J. Elless

Date: 12/18/2024 12:15:00 PM

Kim that is beautiful. Merry Christmas. you are sharp there. I'm one of the few, keep rolling. God bless us everyone.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2024 5:12:00 PM

Love: God bless us everyone! Thank you, R.J.! I so appreciate you!

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2024 10:17:00 AM

This speaks strongly of faith, and staying in Direction Kim.'

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2024 12:00:00 PM

Thank you Joe! :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 12/18/2024 6:28:00 AM

Dear Kim, I love your alliterative message about the depth and transformative nature of prayer. Yes, true prayer is not satisfied with superficiality but seeks to ignite a deeper spiritual connection with each breath. Merry Christmas, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2024 8:55:00 AM

Merry Christmas, sweet friend! Thank you!

Yann Rolland

Date: 12/18/2024 4:33:00 AM

I enjoyed the "oxymoron" and alliterations, very creative sharing thanks poet

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/18/2024 8:55:00 AM

Thank you, Yann! :)