Richard Lamoureux Poet Terzanelle

Warrior Princess

Warrior princess the weaver of words.
She wields the septre of the night.
Commands the heavens and the birds.

Watch her face bathed in moonlight.
He has no will power to resist her charms.
She wields the septre of the night.

A strong man like a baby in her arms.
She writes each move that he makes.
He has no willpower to resist her charms.

He knows he has made his mistakes.
Why did he walk through Fantasies door?
She writes each move that he makes.

He bows before her head on the floor.
"forgive me for invading your dreams"
Why did he walk through fantasies door?

All the power is not hers it seems.
Warrior princess the weaver of words.
"forgive me for invading your dreams"
He commands the heavens she is the bird!

Eileen wrote a poem about a man invading her dreams
I wrote this one for her, the stranger flips the tables.
I hope you enjoy Eileen!

On your Birthday Eileen I thought I would repost the poem I wrote for you.

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Eileen Manassian July 18, 2024 at 2:52 AM Sweet. Came back to read this. So so well written. Thanks again. :) Should it be fantasy's door? I'm taking a screenshot so I can keep this incase anything happens to PS. hugs

Darren White December 30, 2016 at 8:03 AM I just dropped by Eileen's page, and came across this poem. And I dedided to find it on your own page of poems.It flows so naturally, I am awed. Today I posted my own very first terzanelle, so I am a puppy that has a lot to learn. But I will get there by reading yours, and more, and work on it till I am satisfied with it :)

Funom Makama May 26, 2016 at 1:01 PM A wonderful piece. I love this beautiful share

Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2016 at 6:09 PM Fantastic flip of the table, Sir!! This is so awesome. WHat a wonderful birthday treat for Eileen.

Red Fiery May 22, 2016 at 12:04 AM Both the poems are equally greAt ... I Really enjoyed reading this excellent work. Hugs ~REd~ A7 from me Richard Lamoureux May 22, 2016 at 11:23 AM Hi Red, thanks for the encouraging comment and hug.

Arthur Vaso May 18, 2016 at 11:38 PM Beautiful poem and nice of you to do for Eileen!!! :) Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 11:57 PM Thanks Arthur.;0)

Timothy Hicks May 18, 2016 at 12:43 PM Happy Birthday, Eileen! :) What a peculiar dream, but great material to get the pen flowing. She will continue to be the Warrior Princess with her words ... how very sweet of you, Richard. Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:21 PM Thanks Timothy!

Eileen Manassian May 18, 2016 at 12:42 PM WOW! I remember this one SO SO well. This is beautiful, Richard. :) Words are the best gift. I had a long busy day and it was your Mom who let me know you've posted this. You help me believe in myself. That's the greatest gift, Rick. I'm rambling....Thank you, is what I'm trying to say, thank you for always being in my corner. Your friendship gives joy to my heart. Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:20 PM My pleasure, I hope you are enjoying your day.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 18, 2016 at 12:22 PM - A beautiful gift, Richard ......... (I hope you have one for my b-day :) - Congratulations dear Eileen! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:21 PM Thanks Anne-Lise.:0)

Mama Bear May 18, 2016 at 11:19 AM Nicely done for Eileen Hope she enjoys a great birthday as she is a great lady See you tomorrow Love mom Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM Horray!!!

Poet Tacito May 18, 2016 at 9:40 AM Fantastic. I recall this one. Happy B-day, Eileen and thank you for this, Richard!!! Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM Thanks Drake.

Tim Smith May 18, 2016 at 6:43 AM Oh it is great to read this again Richard. It is a joy to see such an outpouring of love for our sweet Eileen. Richard Lamoureux May 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM Thanks Tim.