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Warped Wrhymes 1

Jack and Jill Went up the hill And there she broke her water She laid down Upon the ground And bore them both a daughter

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Date: 1/21/2024 8:12:00 PM
Thanks I need all the laughs I can get.Good to see you exercising.Going back now for seconds.
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Date: 1/18/2024 9:42:00 AM
I've missed your poetic craftiness, Jeff.
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Lin Lane
Date: 1/18/2024 3:30:00 PM
Whatever it takes to get you back, Jeff.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/18/2024 3:16:00 PM
I've been wanting to get back, but they haven't been coming - maybe some more warped wryhmes will though :-)
Date: 1/18/2024 9:06:00 AM
Warped Wrhymes, indeed! Wow, Jeff! Your poem is fun, fantastic and amazing! I don't usually use that many exclamation points in one comment but this poem deserves an exuberant expression of appreciation! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/18/2024 3:16:00 PM
aw, shucks - thanks Susan!
Date: 1/18/2024 8:47:00 AM
hilarious, jeff! wish i'd thought of that!
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 1/18/2024 3:17:00 PM
thanks, Ilene!

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