Warped Wrhymes 1

Jack and Jill
Went up the hill
And there she broke her water

She laid down
Upon the ground
And bore them both a daughter
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Rhymer Avatar
January 21, 2024 at 8:12 PM
Thanks I need all the laughs I can get.Good to see you exercising.Going back now for seconds.
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 9:42 AM
I've missed your poetic craftiness, Jeff.
Lane Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:30 PM
Whatever it takes to get you back, Jeff.
Kyser Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:16 PM
I've been wanting to get back, but they haven't been coming - maybe some more warped wryhmes will though :-)
Ashley Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Warped Wrhymes, indeed! Wow, Jeff! Your poem is fun, fantastic and amazing! I don't usually use that many exclamation points in one comment but this poem deserves an exuberant expression of appreciation! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Kyser Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:16 PM
aw, shucks - thanks Susan!
Bauer Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 8:47 AM
hilarious, jeff! wish i'd thought of that!
Kyser Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:17 PM
thanks, Ilene!
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