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Warnings and Advice

Warnings and Advice

Looking away, the talk means more
ignoring the facts, it's all a bore
prepare for nothing
because nothing is seen
where have you been ?
where have you been ?

Looking faraway, the money means more
stating the facts, becoming a bore
preparing for nothing
because nothing is seen
where have they been ?
where have they been ?

Looking at the door, the lock means more
ignoring the warnings, it was just a bore
l prepared for nothing, because nothing l seen
where have l been ?
where have l been ?

We prepared for nothing, because nothing we seen
where have we been ? where have we been ?

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Date: 3/8/2020 10:02:00 AM
A very well written lyric! A have never tried this form. Great job, Panagiota xx
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 3/8/2020 10:33:00 AM
thank you..l'm a amateur lyricist ..l'm still studying as it's not easy to do as the format changes so fast in the music industry. Lyric's that were written years ago is not wanted now in modern times..lm still trying to get it right. thanks for kind comment. Jx
Date: 2/4/2020 12:09:00 AM
We all feel like screaming similar thoughts but few do. Good on you for letting this one out. Good poetry comes from taking risks and helps us grow as people. Good luck David in NZ
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 2/4/2020 1:28:00 PM
hi David, how r you ? thank u again for another kind comment. l had forgotten about this one l wrote, seems like ages ago now..l must try & get back into writing, lv let other things crowd it out. Anyway thank you again and take care. J.

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