Alexis Y. Poet Couplet

Warning

The other day I was in the shopping mall,
just like humpty dumpty I had a great fall.

I had to go real bad,I ran past the sign,  
I hurt like hell and I just sat and whined

All because I didn't read that darn sign:

CAUTION WET FLOOR 

Thank goodness I don't have to pay a fine. 
(Tell that to my aching bones).





10-15-16

Contest: Warnings
Sponsor: Viv Wigley

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Augustus Black November 9, 2016 at 2:44 AM Hi. Alexis - I like your writing style here. That kind of stuffs happens in life. Nice Couplet. I'm sorry for being not there for catching you. Alexis Y. November 9, 2016 at 2:53 AM It's ok it's the thought that counts:-) Alexis

Freddie Robinson Jr. November 1, 2016 at 7:30 AM Funny as all outdoors, yet very honestly expressed. A delightful poem, my dear. Love you always. RW

Wendy Rycroft October 20, 2016 at 2:37 PM Good poem I've not thought of a good one yet x I'm always slipping x It spoke to me x

Lim'Rik Flats October 19, 2016 at 4:36 PM :-) Your inner limericist survived//and is very much alive//I'm so glad//coulda been bad//remember, writing lim'riks revives! ps. thanks for the warning;-) Alexis Y. October 22, 2016 at 1:05 AM Hi John, That's a good limerick. You were your name proud Oh "Limerick King" I appreciate that you visited me. PS, it was my pleasure to give you such a warning.

Janice Canerdy October 17, 2016 at 11:33 AM Ouch!--and a 7, Alexis! Janice

Joseph May October 15, 2016 at 6:08 PM Nice write Alexis...hope you're Ok....

Tim Smith October 15, 2016 at 4:36 PM I know a good lawyer... seriously I hope you are alright

Eileen Manassian October 15, 2016 at 3:29 PM Oh Dear....I hope your aching bones mend soon, sweetie. This was a light hearted write...though not so funny for the achy body parts. Thanks for your recent visit to my poem. Sending hugs

Arthur Vaso October 15, 2016 at 12:39 PM LOL thanks for the smile! :) I do hope you are ok!

Anne-Lise Andresen October 15, 2016 at 12:30 PM - Careful ...... it's painful ....and it's embarrassing - GL in the cotest, Alexis - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison October 15, 2016 at 12:16 PM OUCH! great warning Alexis:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx