Warmth of Lips

dressing the twilight
with rhinestones of red passion
lovers flame warm lips


Creative Haiku for Charlotte Puddifoot
Sept 21/2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Onclaud Avatar
October 2, 2014 at 12:59 AM
your time to blaze a winning trail; so splendid, rhoma.. sweet congrats on your top spot!
Gibson Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Gorgeous imagery. Congrats.
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem Rhoma
Yaseen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 4:27 AM
THIS ONE IS A BEAUTY AND DESERVES A WIN.. CONGRATS DEAR FRIEND MALIK
A. Sharma Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 12:03 AM
That's real romantic n hot Rhoma! Congrats on top place win!
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:02 PM
oooh lalala hot hot hot. Congrats for top win.
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:38 PM
How romantic. Congratulations on your first place win.
Ebbs Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 5:35 PM
Congrats...sensuous :)
Puddifoot Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:58 PM
oh this is imagery to die for, a stunning visual! original and beautifully sensual; I love the idea of 'dressing the twilight' (just a little apostrophe needed on 'lovers') - congrats on your 1st place win in my contest :)
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:55 PM
dropping back with my congrats on your top spot:-) hugs Jan xxx
Horsman Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Oh the visual is superb
Sietesantos Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:38 PM
Oooh! What a beautiful romantic passionate haiku! I love it! This is certainly a winner. Pandita
Allison Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 2:24 PM
wonderfully expressive haiku good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
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