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Warmth of July

Sun’s top-notch, seven hues; and the silent butterflies are free to roam in leafy tent, alight on little shoulders. A moon jar of fireflies released; a starry night of fireworks explodes. The stellar, stupendous warmth of July!

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Date: 7/29/2023 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2023 12:25:00 AM
Very beautiful scenic decoration. Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2023 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 7/28/2023 3:08:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2023 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Date: 7/28/2023 10:38:00 AM
Beautiful descriptions. Congrats for this gem
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2023 3:41:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I enjoyed your contest!
Date: 7/28/2023 8:00:00 AM
Dear Kim, your lively imagery captures the wonders and joys of July with poetic finesse. Such a splendid piece! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2023 3:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! :)
Date: 7/27/2023 7:10:00 PM
REALLY good job, Kim. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2023 5:14:00 AM
Thank you, Janice <3
Date: 7/13/2023 9:52:00 AM
Yours is an excellent Etheree, Kim. The flow and rhythmic beat of each line is important, not just fitting in syllables to follow the rules...and you have accomplished this. ~ Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/13/2023 11:06:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paul! :)
Date: 7/10/2023 6:41:00 AM
Love your Etheree poem, Kim. Beautiful images of butterflies, fireflies! "stupendous warmth" - great word choice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/10/2023 3:15:00 PM
Thank you, sweet Mala!
Date: 7/9/2023 6:48:00 AM
Nice work Kim, this has great imagery with beautiful scenes, ~AG
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2023 10:45:00 AM
Thank you, Arastu! I came at this from different angles until it came together!
Date: 7/8/2023 9:09:00 PM
This is a great 'poemmercial' for the Glorious Fourth, Kim. Could be a great video poem as well. Really great, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/9/2023 10:44:00 AM
Thank you so much! You are top-notch! :)
Date: 7/8/2023 6:21:00 PM
Very nice Ehteree.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2023 8:02:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 7/8/2023 3:48:00 PM
I enjoyed your Etheree on July, Kim. You got alot in a short poem. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2023 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Bill!
Date: 7/8/2023 1:37:00 PM
I enjoyed your fun "Warmth of July" write. Have a great weekend...............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2023 8:01:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 7/8/2023 11:30:00 AM
Gorgeous writing, Kim! You're on a role!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/8/2023 12:08:00 PM
Thank you! You and other Soupers are inspiring! God bless!

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