Kim Rodrigues Poet Etheree

Warmth of July

Sun’s
top-notch,
seven hues;
and the silent
butterflies are free
to roam in leafy tent,
alight on little shoulders.
A moon jar of fireflies released;
a starry night of fireworks explodes.
The stellar, stupendous warmth of July!

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Sara Kendrick July 29, 2023 at 12:19 PM Congratulations on this winning work. Way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex July 29, 2023 at 12:25 AM Very beautiful scenic decoration. Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues July 29, 2023 at 5:10 AM Thank you, Chris!

Kim Merryman July 28, 2023 at 3:08 PM Lovely imagery, Kim! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M. Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2023 at 3:41 PM Thank you, Kim!

Andrea Dietrich July 28, 2023 at 10:38 AM Beautiful descriptions. Congrats for this gem Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2023 at 3:41 PM Thank you, Andrea! I enjoyed your contest!

Susan Ashley July 28, 2023 at 8:00 AM Dear Kim, your lively imagery captures the wonders and joys of July with poetic finesse. Such a splendid piece! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2023 at 3:40 PM Thank you so much, Susan! :)

Janice Canerdy July 27, 2023 at 7:10 PM REALLY good job, Kim. CONGRATS on your well-deserved win. Janice Kim Rodrigues July 28, 2023 at 5:14 AM Thank you, Janice <3

Paul Callus July 13, 2023 at 9:52 AM Yours is an excellent Etheree, Kim. The flow and rhythmic beat of each line is important, not just fitting in syllables to follow the rules...and you have accomplished this. ~ Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues July 13, 2023 at 11:06 AM Thank you so much, Paul! :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury July 10, 2023 at 6:41 AM Love your Etheree poem, Kim. Beautiful images of butterflies, fireflies! "stupendous warmth" - great word choice Kim Rodrigues July 10, 2023 at 3:15 PM Thank you, sweet Mala!

Arastu Goyal July 9, 2023 at 6:48 AM Nice work Kim, this has great imagery with beautiful scenes, ~AG Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2023 at 10:45 AM Thank you, Arastu! I came at this from different angles until it came together!

Gershon Wolf July 8, 2023 at 9:09 PM This is a great 'poemmercial' for the Glorious Fourth, Kim. Could be a great video poem as well. Really great, Gershon Kim Rodrigues July 9, 2023 at 10:44 AM Thank you so much! You are top-notch! :)

A. Ormulyce July 8, 2023 at 6:21 PM Very nice Ehteree. Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2023 at 8:02 PM Thank you!

Bill Baker July 8, 2023 at 3:48 PM I enjoyed your Etheree on July, Kim. You got alot in a short poem. Bill Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2023 at 8:02 PM Thank you, Bill!

Paula Goldsmith July 8, 2023 at 1:37 PM I enjoyed your fun "Warmth of July" write. Have a great weekend............... Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2023 at 8:01 PM Thank you, Paula!

Paige Hind July 8, 2023 at 11:30 AM Gorgeous writing, Kim! You're on a role! Kim Rodrigues July 8, 2023 at 12:08 PM Thank you! You and other Soupers are inspiring! God bless!