Chris Green Poet Rhyme

Warm In the Love

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The sunrise this dawn remains sleeping,
clouds have now taken the show
Winter has come with a vengeance this morning,
coating the valley in snow

Still as I look out the window,
beauty my eyes can’t compare
Chilly this day in a blanket of wonders,
loveliness welcomed to share

For as my thoughts seem to wander,
beyond this December view
All I can see is an enchanting smile,
as I am thinking of you

So let the weather keep coming,
cold as it drifts on the ground
I will imagine your arms wrapped around me,
warm in the love I have found

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Ok, you caught me...no snow here 
but my mind is a little foggy this morning, 
does that count?

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Hello There December 9, 2019 at 11:53 PM A blanket of snow is perfect for snuggling into this blanket of love and affection ~ both pure and serene... lovely! Chris Green December 10, 2019 at 7:55 AM As are your kind words to me my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

Jennifer Proxenos December 7, 2019 at 2:24 PM Hi Chris, 'love is a many splendid thing' or from the Beatlemania era "I love you yeh, yeh, yeh, or 'Strangers in the night' another one of our favorites. A Brilliant, loving poem, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you Jennifer for the comparisons to some amazing songs, what a nice thing to do.

Kim Rodrigues December 7, 2019 at 4:33 AM No sun, cold and cloudy here yesterday. So poems do come at least in part from the imagination. Love the first verse and the romance of the last. Chris Green December 9, 2019 at 9:49 AM Thank you so much Kim. Yep, when it comes to snow I do have use my imagination. : )

Darlene De Beaulieu December 6, 2019 at 2:24 PM Hello Chris Green, a beautiful poem of love felt. Love and Joy. Darlene Darlene De Beaulieu December 11, 2019 at 1:09 PM Merry Christmas Chris Green. Have anice day my friend. peace and love. to you.Always. Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 3:47 PM Thank you so very much Darlene. Your kindness is truly appreciated my friend.

Na Na December 6, 2019 at 1:12 PM lol hi Chris. beautiful write my friend. Thanks for sharing. There is snow on the ground here :) Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 1:16 PM Thanks my friend. Just the opposite here, very warm and sunny.

John Hamilton December 6, 2019 at 12:44 PM Nice way to start the morning! It's overcast and rainy here in Niagara. Feels warmer after reading this! Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 1:15 PM Thanks again John. I'm going to have to get a bigger hat after reading your comments. : ) Stay warm my friend.

Ilene Bauer December 6, 2019 at 11:52 AM Beautiful words to wake up to, Chris, snow or not! Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 1:15 PM Thank you so very much Ilene. I appreciate you my friend.

Winged Warrior December 6, 2019 at 11:07 AM When the fog clears...just don't look in the mirror lol...Kidding bro...smooth sailing with words my friend...^WW^ :o) Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 11:20 AM Trust me, I try to avoid mirrors at all costs. : ) Thanks so much my friend.

Sandra Adams December 6, 2019 at 9:37 AM you don't need an excuse to pen a romantic wonder...fog, snow, clouds, sun, whatever your mind conjures up is always stunning...in every way...you just have a way with words, weaving them into perfect rhyming patterns that carry the reader on magical journeys with you... love this one my friend.... good morning Chris :) Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 10:01 AM Good morning Sandy. :) I know my morning is so much brighter since you stopped by. Your wonderful comments are always the most beautiful sunrise to me my friend.

Susan Woodrow December 6, 2019 at 9:30 AM lol at the footnote...the eyes will see what the mind insists or the readers get lulled by the poet until he jogs them awake and makes a gray morning much brighter :) Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 10:00 AM Thanks so very much Susan. If this poem made your day a little brighter then it did it's job. :)

Lin Lane December 6, 2019 at 9:23 AM Fog, snow, you need no excuse for your flight of poetic fancy. As enchanting as the smile in your third verse, Chris. Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 9:59 AM Thanks so much Lin. Hopefully as enchanting as your kind words always are to me and the smile they bring to my face. :)

Demetrios Trifiatis December 6, 2019 at 9:17 AM Enchanting romantic poem that glorifies nature's beauty as well dear, Chris! Much loved! Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 9:58 AM Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you stopping by.

Heidi Sands December 6, 2019 at 8:32 AM It will count just fine Chris, with this beautiful poem. I love it :) Chris Green December 6, 2019 at 9:57 AM Thank you Heidi. Your kindness always makes the day more beautiful for me.