Warm Apple Pie

Every Sunday afternoon we’d go to my grandparent’s home, those were the trips I’ll never forget with my siblings and I- My grandpa would greet us with that pleasant smile shown, and I’d always smell the sweetness of my grandma’s apple pie. Looking back at those memories it makes me want to sigh. One time she taught me from scratch how to make her delicacy, the correct way to kneed the dough, how much sugar to utilize- I remember grandpa whistling an enchanting Christmas melody, and to this day every year I still bake those homemade pies. At the county fair in two thousand and nine I won first prize. My mother never could get the recipe right, so much time wasted, but I prevailed every time, I guess I was a natural from the start- My husband says it’s the most delicious food he’s ever tasted, as I bake those warm apple pies from my amiable and gracious heart. Last year I taught my daughter to bake, with the recipe I shan’t part. The Scent Of Baking Bread, The Scent Of Clean Sheets Fresh Off The Clothesline Poetry Contest Sara Kendrick February 16, 2018
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Steele Avatar
April 1, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Congrats, Laura. Deliciously written. Well deserved. Such a mouth watering treat.
Gauthier Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:56 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 7:15 PM
How VERY cool that you won first place for your pie in 2009. I bet that was such a proud moment for you. This would be my hubbie's top aroma from childhood , for SURE. Congrats on your win, Laura.
Allison Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 12:27 PM
yummy memories LuLoo! congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 11:58 AM
Oh, there is nothing better than the aroma of a freshly baked apple pie. Nicely written sweet Luloo. Congrats. John
Sinha-Roy Avatar
March 30, 2018 at 1:42 AM
Congratulations, Laura on your with with such a nostalgic poem.
Gupta Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 10:11 PM
My tongue is moist ... Congratulations on your top win with this excellent apple pie aroma poem ...
Gentry Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations on your win with this poem of memories!
Roper Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 1:09 PM
Laura, congratulations on your win! I hope you have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve
Talbot Avatar
March 29, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Most aromas please us... Some smells they do tease us... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Odours can have us pinching noeses... Thank goodness for roses... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Apple pies, you write of their aroma... Like Line said, "So good", were coming over... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Congratulations Laura, on an aromatic, tasty win... Mick
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March 29, 2018 at 10:05 AM
Wonderful that your pies have won in the county fair. I know that you are so glad that you are keeping the recipes alive. Apple pie is one of the best pies made. Congrats on your placement in my contest. I appreciate you participating. Sara
Gauthier Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 5:08 PM
O Laura, you are such a tease! We're all coming over for that delectable piece of apple pie. We'll just follow the aroma. Wonderful poem with just the perfect ratio of nostalgia.
Parveen Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Hi Laura,So lucky to have a beautiful Gran.:)
One Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 5:57 AM
Sounds so yummy!!! What beautiful nostalgic memories your portray in your poem..
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