Wardrobe Malfunctions!

There was an old tranny named Joe
who dressed as a nun and a who',
both sides of the Bible,
both sacred and tribal,
he didn't know which way to go!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 11, 2009 at 3:50 PM
I love a good limerick, and you've done the form justice! Very well written! ~Trudy
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April 11, 2009 at 3:14 PM
LOL great here, Keith !! At a dock in Ketchikan where the cruises pull up they put on a little skit ... one woman dressed as a nun with her finger wagging at the flapper out to greet the boys ... your limerick brought that memory back!! Do I have your day/month birthday? Would like to sing/blog if I could ...
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April 10, 2009 at 10:07 AM
This is outrageously funny, Keith! "He didn't know which way to go" can be taken on many levels, but the one you implied has given me a good laugh. Love, Carolyn
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April 10, 2009 at 10:02 AM
Keith, this poem works on so many levels I reserved further comment until I have deeper understanding ... I love a write that mystifies ... enormous talent.
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April 10, 2009 at 9:31 AM
Oh my, Keith..that's a dubious looking "who' ". I had given it another sound...bad me!:) Poor Joe sounds rather confused. A fun write; it certainly gave me some smiles.:) Blessed Good Friday to you and yours...Love, Mikki
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