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Wardrobe Malfunctions!

There was an old tranny named Joe who dressed as a nun and a who', both sides of the Bible, both sacred and tribal, he didn't know which way to go!

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Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 4/11/2009 3:50:00 PM

I love a good limerick, and you've done the form justice! Very well written! ~Trudy

Sue Mason

Date: 4/11/2009 3:14:00 PM

LOL great here, Keith !! At a dock in Ketchikan where the cruises pull up they put on a little skit ... one woman dressed as a nun with her finger wagging at the flapper out to greet the boys ... your limerick brought that memory back!! Do I have your day/month birthday? Would like to sing/blog if I could ...

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/10/2009 10:07:00 AM

This is outrageously funny, Keith! "He didn't know which way to go" can be taken on many levels, but the one you implied has given me a good laugh. Love, Carolyn

L'Nass Shango

Date: 4/10/2009 10:02:00 AM

Keith, this poem works on so many levels I reserved further comment until I have deeper understanding ... I love a write that mystifies ... enormous talent.

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 4/10/2009 9:31:00 AM

Oh my, Keith..that's a dubious looking "who' ". I had given it another sound...bad me!:) Poor Joe sounds rather confused. A fun write; it certainly gave me some smiles.:) Blessed Good Friday to you and yours...Love, Mikki