War Zone

War Zone Rapid bullet pops echo through midnight, chasing away the old year.

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Date: 8/25/2021 6:41:00 AM

Nicely penned. To me, the Haiku suggests both celebratory promise + the ominous. Cheers, Brian

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 8/25/2021 1:10:00 PM

Thank you Brian for checking out and commenting on so many of my poems today. Blessings, Jennifer

Date: 2/11/2021 7:12:00 PM

Very cool!

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/13/2021 1:28:00 AM

Glad you like it:)

Date: 2/2/2021 1:59:00 PM

They make a lot of noise at midnight every New Year's Eve. You have described it well here.

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/13/2021 1:28:00 AM

Thank you Robert! Have a great weekend!

Date: 1/3/2021 3:25:00 AM

A beautiful haiku.Wishing you a happy new year.

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 2/13/2021 1:27:00 AM

Thank you Akham! I hope 2021 treats you well.

Date: 1/1/2021 8:02:00 PM

A great haiku. Wishing you the best this New Year's Day! Evelyn :=)

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/1/2021 10:37:00 PM

Thank you Evelyn! Glad you like it. Happy New Year to you!

Date: 1/1/2021 10:49:00 AM

You must live in Honolulu! Aloha! Rico

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/1/2021 5:39:00 PM

Aloha Rico! This is Fresno California. Happy New Year!

Date: 1/1/2021 7:09:00 AM

Happy New YEAR! God B L E S S you

Jennifer Fenn
Date: 1/1/2021 5:38:00 PM

Same to you Regina!