War Zone

War Zone

Rapid bullet pops
echo through midnight, chasing
away the old year.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Sambourne Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 6:41 AM
Nicely penned. To me, the Haiku suggests both celebratory promise + the ominous. Cheers, Brian
Fenn Avatar
August 25, 2021 at 1:10 PM
Thank you Brian for checking out and commenting on so many of my poems today. Blessings, Jennifer
Rodrigues Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 7:12 PM
Very cool!
Fenn Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Glad you like it:)
Pettit Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 1:59 PM
They make a lot of noise at midnight every New Year's Eve. You have described it well here.
Fenn Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 1:28 AM
Thank you Robert! Have a great weekend!
Singh Avatar
January 3, 2021 at 3:25 AM
A beautiful haiku.Wishing you a happy new year.
Fenn Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 1:27 AM
Thank you Akham! I hope 2021 treats you well.
Buehler Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 8:02 PM
A great haiku. Wishing you the best this New Year's Day! Evelyn :=)
Fenn Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 10:37 PM
Thank you Evelyn! Glad you like it. Happy New Year to you!
Leffanta Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 10:49 AM
You must live in Honolulu! Aloha! Rico
Fenn Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 5:39 PM
Aloha Rico! This is Fresno California. Happy New Year!
Mcintosh Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 7:09 AM
Happy New YEAR! God B L E S S you
Fenn Avatar
January 1, 2021 at 5:38 PM
Same to you Regina!
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