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War on Earth

Earth steals
the Moon's shine
curving line
sun-cast torn form
a divine misery.

Throw Heaven's
human scheme
hemmed within
the earthly show
fairer than the skies.

(Blackout of At a Lunar Eclipse by Thomas Hardy)
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Buhagiar Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 2:47 AM
I admit these black out poems do not attract me, but you did an excellent job.
Terry Avatar
October 7, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Blackout poems are difficult. Thanks for the review.
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