War

War is suffocating. You see them run through a line of fire. You wonder will they survive and then, you see others die before your eyes. You stand and shout to someone familiar but no response came. Therefore, vehemently you ran to not bleed again. Would you make it out of this alive or would you die trying? You would not remember either, when the life is taken from your eyes. Stay positive! Stay alive… User Name: Verlena Pseudonym: Oblivion Dark Sunshine Motif: War (Epic)

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Deborah Shiells

Date: 4/30/2014 1:57:00 PM

Hello Verlena, What a powerfully written write!! Thanks so much for sharing this poem with us here. Peace, Deborah

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 4/30/2014 3:46:00 PM

Thanks Deborah for your supportive remarks and your support of me as a Poetess on PoetrySoup.com. I truly appreciate all the Soupers literary support via their comments and contests... Verlena :0))s.