War

Afore likewise yonder lies the way of peace Resting in another’s prayer and sacrifice

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Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/10/2010 7:15:00 AM

Hi John. This is a nice entry to Brian's contest. War is so dreadful. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/7/2010 11:25:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your poetry today John. I am happy that I am able to read it. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/7/2010 5:22:00 AM

Thought provoking Imagism. Keep the creative writes flowing. Good luck in the contest if it is an entry. Sara

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2010 1:01:00 AM

John, You share a deep message in this carefully created poem. Blessings, Connie

Brian Strand

Date: 2/7/2010 12:36:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest John.Rgds Brian

Date: 2/6/2010 4:38:00 PM

Amen! So much truth in your words. Blessings to all the men and women who sacrifice so much for our freedom. Good message here. Best wishes in the contest. Karen