Want To Fly

Flying through the air
Rocket strapped on my back.
Breeze blowing my hair.
Wild dream flying very fast
Knowing that I'm free at last.


"Tanka Me A Dream" contest by Jimmy Anderson
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wilson Avatar
February 12, 2011 at 3:57 PM
what a hopeful picture you've painted and very soon will be your dream come true Jimmy...love,Deb
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February 11, 2011 at 9:10 PM
I LOVE flying dreams. Hope this one does well. Luv, Andrea
Tate Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 5:48 PM
Good poem, Jimmy
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February 11, 2011 at 3:09 PM
Hello Jimmy, Yes, I know this feeling, a little differently than you perhaps but still. You have a very fine wit about you Jimmy, this is wonderful! Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar
Mehta Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 1:28 PM
It's a definitely wild dream, Jimmy
Sweetheart Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 1:04 PM
Wonderful write Jimmy and very expressive entry into the contest ..am sure Michael will luv.. good luck with luv..my friend..
Haick Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 12:30 PM
A wonderful Tanka, JAM. Wishing you all the best with this very timely dream that is due to come through for you, soooooon! Love, Annalise
Neels Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Jimmy a brilliant Tanka, I know how much truth there is in this one for you.. Keep the faith and good luck for the contest.. ;-)
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