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Want To Fly

Flying through the air Rocket strapped on my back. Breeze blowing my hair. Wild dream flying very fast Knowing that I'm free at last. "Tanka Me A Dream" contest by Jimmy Anderson

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Date: 2/12/2011 3:57:00 PM
what a hopeful picture you've painted and very soon will be your dream come true Jimmy...love,Deb
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Date: 2/11/2011 9:10:00 PM
I LOVE flying dreams. Hope this one does well. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/11/2011 5:48:00 PM
Good poem, Jimmy
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Date: 2/11/2011 3:09:00 PM
Hello Jimmy, Yes, I know this feeling, a little differently than you perhaps but still. You have a very fine wit about you Jimmy, this is wonderful! Good luck in the contest As Always, Shar
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Date: 2/11/2011 1:28:00 PM
It's a definitely wild dream, Jimmy
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Date: 2/11/2011 1:04:00 PM
Wonderful write Jimmy and very expressive entry into the contest ..am sure Michael will luv.. good luck with luv..my friend..
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Date: 2/11/2011 12:30:00 PM
A wonderful Tanka, JAM. Wishing you all the best with this very timely dream that is due to come through for you, soooooon! Love, Annalise
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Date: 2/11/2011 11:55:00 AM
Jimmy a brilliant Tanka, I know how much truth there is in this one for you.. Keep the faith and good luck for the contest.. ;-)
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