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Aging heart gathering dust
In working order, despite the rust
Love of poetry is a must
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008


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Date: 12/20/2008 2:07:00 PM
Now that one takes the cake....oh! FOR GOODNESS SAKES!.....Wonderful ad!...That one's surely from the heart....keep up the great work....Lawrence in Lou. Ky.
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Date: 12/6/2008 4:18:00 PM
Very cute... ;0)
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Date: 12/6/2008 1:27:00 PM
Very clever Barbara! Though not quite in SENRYU form it reads like one... well done! Keith
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Date: 12/3/2008 12:39:00 PM
Greatest ad I ever read! Nice work! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/3/2008 5:31:00 AM
Love the ad. :) The first two lines are killers. Aging heart still working..I love this a lot. Great job Barbara.
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:27:00 AM
Cool ad, Barbara. Brilliant humour and rhyme. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/2/2008 3:28:00 PM
this poem is fun and thoughtful, Fritz
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Date: 12/2/2008 10:39:00 AM
This is brilliant! :) Very cleverly written! God bless, Amy :)
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:40:00 AM
Very clever rhyme, and I love the first two lines especially, although line 3 is definitely "a must"! ~Juliane
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:15:00 AM
Great wit and rhyme , Barbara .... What !!! No Box No. !!!
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Date: 12/2/2008 9:00:00 AM
How extremely and utterly entertaining. You have a great sense of humour Barbara. In Christ
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