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Aging heart gathering dust
In working order, despite the rust
Love of poetry is a must

Copyright © Barbara Gorelick | Year Posted 2008

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December 20, 2008 at 2:07 PM

Now that one takes the cake....oh! FOR GOODNESS SAKES!.....Wonderful ad!...That one's surely from the heart....keep up the great work....Lawrence in Lou. Ky.

December 6, 2008 at 4:18 PM

Very cute... ;0)

Keith Bickerstaffe

December 6, 2008 at 1:27 PM

Very clever Barbara! Though not quite in SENRYU form it reads like one... well done! Keith

December 3, 2008 at 12:39 PM

Greatest ad I ever read! Nice work! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

December 3, 2008 at 5:31 AM

Love the ad. :) The first two lines are killers. Aging heart still working..I love this a lot. Great job Barbara.

December 3, 2008 at 1:27 AM

Cool ad, Barbara. Brilliant humour and rhyme. Love, Nigel

December 2, 2008 at 3:28 PM

this poem is fun and thoughtful, Fritz

December 2, 2008 at 10:39 AM

This is brilliant! :) Very cleverly written! God bless, Amy :)

December 2, 2008 at 9:40 AM

Very clever rhyme, and I love the first two lines especially, although line 3 is definitely "a must"! ~Juliane

December 2, 2008 at 9:15 AM

Great wit and rhyme , Barbara .... What !!! No Box No. !!!

December 2, 2008 at 9:00 AM

How extremely and utterly entertaining. You have a great sense of humour Barbara. In Christ

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