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Aging heart gathering dust In working order, despite the rust Love of poetry is a must

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Lawrence Ingle

Date: 12/20/2008 2:07:00 PM

Now that one takes the cake....oh! FOR GOODNESS SAKES!.....Wonderful ad!...That one's surely from the heart....keep up the great work....Lawrence in Lou. Ky.

Alina Vitali

Date: 12/6/2008 4:18:00 PM

Very cute... ;0)

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 12/6/2008 1:27:00 PM

Very clever Barbara! Though not quite in SENRYU form it reads like one... well done! Keith

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/3/2008 12:39:00 PM

Greatest ad I ever read! Nice work! Love, Shar

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/3/2008 5:31:00 AM

Love the ad. :) The first two lines are killers. Aging heart still working..I love this a lot. Great job Barbara.

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/3/2008 1:27:00 AM

Cool ad, Barbara. Brilliant humour and rhyme. Love, Nigel

Fritz Purdum

Date: 12/2/2008 3:28:00 PM

this poem is fun and thoughtful, Fritz

Amy Swanson

Date: 12/2/2008 10:39:00 AM

This is brilliant! :) Very cleverly written! God bless, Amy :)

Juliane Thomas

Date: 12/2/2008 9:40:00 AM

Very clever rhyme, and I love the first two lines especially, although line 3 is definitely "a must"! ~Juliane

Sean Kelly

Date: 12/2/2008 9:15:00 AM

Great wit and rhyme , Barbara .... What !!! No Box No. !!!

Laurie Ginn

Date: 12/2/2008 9:00:00 AM

How extremely and utterly entertaining. You have a great sense of humour Barbara. In Christ