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Waning With Rhythm

waning with rhythm native rainstick October - gutters clogged with leaves not all pretty things disclosed hues hide from wandering eyes 10/30/2019

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/31/2019 1:39:00 PM

My neighbor Hugh also hides these hues. (Groan, eh?!). Nicely framed tanka, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2019 5:47:00 PM

Thank you, Gershon!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/31/2019 6:04:00 AM

I love the season and the leaves so. Your poem is awesome. Bless you

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/31/2019 6:35:00 AM

Thank you, sweet poet!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2019 5:24:00 PM

We describe and praise the beauty of autumn leaves, and yet many of them end up in the gutter, hidden and forgotten! ~ Regards // paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2019 5:37:00 PM

Yes! Thank you for the apt comment, alongside the poem. Blessings, Paul!

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/30/2019 12:39:00 PM

Great one! This describes things well :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/30/2019 12:12:00 PM

"gutters clogged with leaves" - such a testament to October, yet rarely thrown in a poem. Well done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/30/2019 1:12:00 PM

Thanks, Caren!