Waning Tune

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You unfurl high over my head Nothing else stands to angst about Unless on a drying rack shed You unfurl high over my head Has lasted since waning throughout Joyful trumpet mouth double fed You unfurl high over my head Nothing else stands to angst about Written: October 04, 2022

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Valsa George

Date: 10/4/2022 10:52:00 PM

Let the angst go away and joy fill in its place. Great triolet dear Lasaad

Bill Baker

Date: 10/4/2022 9:08:00 PM

I like the repeat line in your Triolet, Lasaad. Good Luck in the contest! Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 10/4/2022 4:57:00 PM

Beautiful poem and picture, Lasaad. Awesome imagery employed to describe a dying June. :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/4/2022 3:17:00 PM

Letting go of angst in the middle of life's ever rolling waves! What a wonderful theme for a poem so wonderfully constructed in the triolet format. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2022 1:01:00 PM

- Nothing else to worry about... don't forget the drying rack ... lovely written, Las :)