Sotto Poet Poet Triolet

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Waning Tune

You unfurl high over my head
Nothing else stands to angst about
Unless on a drying rack shed
You unfurl high over my head
Has lasted since waning throughout
Joyful trumpet mouth double fed
You unfurl high over my head
Nothing else stands to angst about


Written: October 04, 2022

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Valsa George October 4, 2022 at 10:52 PM Let the angst go away and joy fill in its place. Great triolet dear Lasaad

Bill Baker October 4, 2022 at 9:08 PM I like the repeat line in your Triolet, Lasaad. Good Luck in the contest! Bill

Evelyn Judy Buehler October 4, 2022 at 4:57 PM Beautiful poem and picture, Lasaad. Awesome imagery employed to describe a dying June. :)

Sam Kauffman October 4, 2022 at 3:17 PM Letting go of angst in the middle of life's ever rolling waves! What a wonderful theme for a poem so wonderfully constructed in the triolet format. Best wishes for the contest! Blessings my friend

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2022 at 1:01 PM - Nothing else to worry about... don't forget the drying rack ... lovely written, Las :)