Home » Poems » Hilo Poet » Waning Crescent

Hilo Poet | + Follow Poet |

Rhyme | + Fav Poem |

| Report |

Waning Crescent

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Hilo Poet.

80+ Free Phase Of The Moon & Moon Phases Photos - Pixabay

Listen to poem:

*Image of Moon Phases & Phase Of The Moon provided by Pixabay. Waning Crescent Poetic Form: Rhyme Arbiter star aloof to eyes caught in a trance fables apiece artless roam arrest promises guise complicit affair strays guileless caprice Muddle of minds in wanton tumble senseless and reckless against fugitive shame e'er betray touch lack fingers fumble its lewd intents stead hearts lay aim Beheld afar in quantum expanse conservative pose sketched silhouette art envisions maestro entrance sparkled chamber stars minuet Dulcet nightwings winks in fleeing arcade charted ambient frame ephemeral epoch begs a freeing golden chariot star's anew claim 2021 May 08 *2nd Place* The Audience Falls Silent ~~Kai Michael Neumann: Judged 2021 June 02 *1st Place* ALL YOURS (May 9) ~~Brian Strand: Judged 2021 May 08

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 8/20/2021 12:19:00 PM

This is a very worthy contender for the anthology, William, so evocative, I especially like 'fugitive shame' and 'sketched silhouette' - as beautiful and beguiling as the stars themselves!

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/20/2021 1:21:00 PM

I appreciate your words of encouragement, Michelle, as I thought it snuggly fits the anthology, focusing on shorter poems. Again, a hearty thanks, Aloha!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/2/2021 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a magical write and picture. I love the full moon. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Hilo Poet
Date: 6/2/2021 12:58:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Paula, for your goodheartedness my friend, Aloha!

Paghunda Zahid

Date: 5/10/2021 3:57:00 PM

Beautiful... Congratulations on your win

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/10/2021 4:03:00 PM

Thanks again, Paghunda, Aloha!

Michael Ellis

Date: 5/9/2021 3:32:00 PM

Beautiful writing.. Should be in a contest ..Love the structure...This poem is a baptism...moving and luquid

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 4:36:00 PM

I extend my courtesies to your natural senses that define you, Michael, I am entered, yet contests are ongoing--appreciate the uplift my friend, Aloha!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2021 9:44:00 AM

some beautiful imagey in this poem, William. Loved that line: dulcet nighwings and ephemeral epoch. I just love melodious words! Congrats on the win. Thanks for the contest you just sponsored!

Hilo Poet
Date: 5/9/2021 10:15:00 AM

I appreciate your wondrous expressions and noted highlights, Andrea, and again, it is indeed my pleasure, Aloha!