Wanderland-Wanderlust

Walking amongst the wooden giants at night The only light was the bright I was giving off I slothed through the land taking it all in I couldn’t even begin what mental state I’m in On a natural vibe I am a one woman tribe Warrior of the night Lioness, princess of nature. It craters me in its beauty Complex continuity I frolic and I talk to it Come with me To the land of lovely I’ll walk thee to the highest point Of your body and mind you will be anointed with joy I want to deploy your passion In the mansion of mother earths madness
Wanderlust Contest 8/11/14 B. Maxine

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Date: 8/18/2014 7:24:00 AM
- A really beautiful poem, B. Maxine ! - Thank you ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/14/2014 9:37:00 PM
yes alliteration is a groove rhythmically- tricky balance with content
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Date: 8/14/2014 5:23:00 AM
i'm glad for your hypnotic ride with holy candle blues- you have a rich poet's soul thanks on you recent poem Wanderlust-- i love this stanza...and if i can be so bold..... your body and mind will be anointed with joy as I deploy our passion in the kingdom of mother earths madness
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Date: 8/14/2014 5:08:00 PM
Great suggestion, but I wanted it to rhyme with passion :). I also lean towards almost an alliteration sense hence "mansion, mother, and madness". But Thank you :)
Date: 8/13/2014 11:14:00 AM
Excellent imagery. Very nicely written. Jim
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Date: 8/12/2014 4:18:00 AM
wonderful imagery good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan x
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Date: 8/12/2014 1:54:00 AM
WOW! I am speechless after this. What beautiful imagery. Best of luck in the contest!
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