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Wandering In Life

Lost in the turbulent waves of life Crashing down on her soul Perpetual sadness continues To wash over losing control Insatiable craving for love Seems impossible to fill Any form of attention Gives her a temporary thrill Inflicting self destruction Is her only form of control So many of her secrets untold Whispers of the past Remind what she wants to forget Blurs of memories play incessantly Which Happen to only be regrets Wondering if she can ever find resolution And piece within get shattered heart She wanders the world Looking for any form of a start

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Skat A

Date: 10/27/2016 2:54:00 PM

Sofia Ra, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/27/2016 2:22:00 AM

Congrats Sofia, for having your fine work featured in the Poetrysoup Homepage!!! ;-)

Sofia Ra
Date: 10/29/2016 8:17:00 PM

Thank you so much teddy

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/25/2016 2:48:00 PM

Sofia,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/23/2016 2:48:00 AM

A very sou-searching poem, Sofia. Powerful self-analysis and self-awareness. That's a good start, seeing and declaring things honestly to oneself. I love this debut poem. May God comfort your heart in these trying times. Love and peace to you.

Sofia Ra
Date: 10/23/2016 9:17:00 PM

After reading your comments I always have the biggest smile freddie.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/20/2016 11:55:00 AM

I like this poem, Sofia. There is a feeling that life has not been too kind to the author, but she hasn't thrown in the towel, as she looks for a new start. May she find the love and happiness that she craves for! ~ Welcome to Soup...poetry can be the right medicine for a shattered heart:) Regards // paul

Sofia Ra
Date: 10/20/2016 5:27:00 PM

Thank you So much paul. Yes you are right she has not given up yet...when I write everything negative fades for the time being, By the way your poetry is beautiful Paul. Thank you for the warm welcome.

Probir Gupta

Date: 10/20/2016 6:58:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poem ... fresh sun rays ...

Sofia Ra
Date: 10/20/2016 8:54:00 AM

Thank you :-)

Jeff Davies

Date: 10/20/2016 4:18:00 AM

Hello Sofia, welcome to poetry soup. Your poem has really great imagery. I hope to read more from you soon.

Sofia Ra
Date: 10/20/2016 8:55:00 AM

Thank you Jeff I really appreciate it.