Get Your Premium Membership


Candles are lit me on As I steps on a stone road Let my foot bleed And live with the pain Then the world spears me As I turn feelingless In a moment I find out my self Has lost in a strange dimension Floating. My soul flies out of flesh Here is the darkness. And the limit? Can't maybe, I just reject to see. Loneliness, anger, happiness, all, Make sense no more. Only death is real. I just want to come home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/9/2013 1:36:00 PM
It's good to know where you are today by recalling where you were yesterday. This has a lot of sadness to it, I understand that feeling. But, thankfully, I got through it. This was a strong piece.
Login to Reply
Candy Avatar
Shirley Candy
Date: 6/9/2013 6:12:00 PM
I think maturity took progress. Joy and sadness within surely made the journey worth. ^_^ Thanks for the kind review, Drake.
Date: 6/9/2013 9:19:00 AM
Very melancholic write Shirley.I once felt this way until I realised that theres something in this life thats worth living for.
Login to Reply
Candy Avatar
Shirley Candy
Date: 6/9/2013 1:00:00 PM
I was lost in desperation until I noticed that there were people so concerned and love me no matter what. So, this kind of personal life experience actually :)