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Waltzing Dawn

The estrangement of a cruising day, plodding onto the dormant senses. Ancestral musings strewn with monotonous contours, faded into crevices of streaming melancholy. Smudged against the sugary tea, dripping hair, soiled feet, the erroneous space between, the cuckoo sang better.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/15/2010 4:37:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Kalyani. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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