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Walter

She stares into the casket open, not what he wanted, but she did, even more now. “Stiffer than he’s ever been.” she snickered, silent, unheard. “O M F G thirty years; look at you in your blazer and that idiotic badge;” she toasted, raising a glass of cola and single malt discovered upon finding the “mislaid” Tantalus key. “I bet you’ll never guess where your model steam engine is?” She whispered into his ear, “Oh, once more into the breach,” she laughed and knowingly winked. “Nothing to say, no repost?” “Not a cutting, hurtful quip?” “you’re dead, you say. Can’t answer.” “I was dead for thirty years!”

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Date: 9/29/2023 11:34:00 AM
Great poem for this contest.. Thank you for writing for my poem and congratulations on your placement..
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Terry Miller
Date: 10/24/2023 3:42:00 AM
Thank you so very much.
Date: 9/21/2023 7:43:00 AM
This is truly a wonderful poem Terry. It ticked every box, and the last line was like the embodiment of the greatest revenge a woman can bestow upon an unworthy spouse. To out live him and be left with all his "toys". A favourite for sure
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/22/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you SV originally I thought what a strange subject for a contest, but I got into it
Date: 9/20/2023 2:57:00 PM
Wow! This is so emotionally charged and bitter. We often empathize with widows but what of those who rejoice in the death. hee hee
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Terry Miller
Date: 9/22/2023 5:26:00 AM
Thank you Karen

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